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A little experiment I was conducting...came up with this .... sounds pretty unique if u ask me but Ill let u be the judge of that...far from conventional i think
as it being an experiment an all ...all comments are welcome...any ideas or...sth
I love the bass man. Really old school one
. You got some nice vibe going on in the intro. I dont like the synth comming around 1:20. Thats too disturbing imo. The snare could use some layering imo. I thinks thats way too experimental for my taste and i found some melodies rather disturbing. Maybe the break could be more upfront. Definitely the snare should be improved. Or you could replace it further in the track with some nasty snare :-D. Just an idea. cheers
Unique, yes, but there's no clear structure there, imagine people dancing to this, it changes a lot throughout the track. The piano sounds like a bunch of short melodies rather than 1 big composition.
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easy now, funky intro mans! interesting choice in bass drum - sounds like a gabba one and a little out of place - maybe change it or turn down the release to get the punch but not the gabbaness of it. agree with the previous comments, there are a bit too many melodies for one tune imo, also yeh that one synth is a bit out of place. the pianos could be a tune in itself and the intro theme could be extended to make another tune too. having said all of that i do like the ideas coming off of this, its good to c people experimenting man, innovate dont imitate (hugo boss). the drums have lots of nice rolls and edits in them too, bags of potential.
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Totally agree with the Shinster. Nice to hear something a bit more experimental - makes you wonder what's coming up next - but there's probably one too many melodies and variations in there. (Well, it's probably about 3 or 4 too many melodies, but you get me drift). This would be awkward to dance to but it's cool for home/car listening.
I'm really not feelin some of those piano melodies. It starts off well enough but then it sort of goes off on it's own and starts doing it's own thing from 2.58 onward. In fact, the whole tune structure starts breaking up from that point.
Beats are nice tho, some cool edits there. I like the snare sound. The sub bass is excellent too.
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almost a ragga style intro the way the beat have been programmed
very cool synth bass, the soud has a nice texture to it, i'm definately givin u top makrs for originality, unique kinda sound uv created, i like experimental stuff
i think the piano sample is a bit too dry, bit of reverb and delay on it?
think that the structure could do with a bit of work, theres quite a few ideas there but i reckon they need to be ironed out into one tune that flows, basically there needs to be more continuity rather tham jumpin between ideas too mcuh
. You got some nice vibe going on in the intro. I dont like the synth comming around 1:20. Thats too disturbing imo. The snare could use some layering imo. I thinks thats way too experimental for my taste and i found some melodies rather disturbing. Maybe the break could be more upfront. Definitely the snare should be improved. Or you could replace it further in the track with some nasty snare :-D. Just an idea. cheers
