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wrm
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Please check out my new track 'Finally free feat. Eva Kabba' and post your comments here!!!

Finnished. We got this idea about making vocals into this track. My housemate sings really awesome so this was a challenge for us. I never done this kind of colab before and it was great experience for me and her. Well you can listen what came out. We are really sutisfied with it so far. Enjoy the track peeps

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26-05-2008 00:22 Homepage of wrm
walcor walcor is a male
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The vocal is nice...indeed!!!

Production vise...clean imo...tho the master volume is a bit low...had to crank up the volume a lot...

the first bass is a bit lost there...but that may be my headphones...I have different sets at work...my home headphones have a better bass element

The saw reese or what u used is too quiet imo could use a little more volume just a tad...

expected some more vocals tho...the theme got a little lost at the end imo...

maybe the kick needs some more oomph...duno...

Nice intro...good long synth...

Overall very nice job...good stuff

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26-05-2008 10:53 Homepage of walcor
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yep, im quite feeling this track, not sure that it needs more on the kick like the previous comment...but hey its all a matter of opinion....

I do agree with the gettin lost comment, try and do a bit of arrangement so it makes the track more structured...maybe a lil breakdown with that bird singin over then bring the rest in....

This aint gospel, im no big time producer or anything just tellin ya what i thought.....
27-05-2008 20:49
Tomos Tomos is a male
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Nice work, excellent stereo panning. The mix is coming out really crisp and clear, with lots of depth. Sounds great on my headphones. I have no real complaints with this apart from the middle section. At around 2.30ish everything seems to die down and go flat for a while. That's exactly where things should be happening, in the middle of the tune. Also, the snare sounds weak from 2.30 to 3.20.

The vocals are excellent by the way. And I love the trippy, experimental vibes in this. Do you happen to listen to Younger Brother and Ott by any chance?

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27-05-2008 21:12 Homepage of Tomos
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beautifull !!!! only a possitive reaction

She has the perfect voice for DnB
29-05-2008 18:46
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hello mate. nice progression / build up of the beat from the start. like the way the vocal subtly comes in, think the first build up could be a bit more defined but thats just nit picking. nice synth lead at around 3:00, really like the melodies from there on.

not much to complain about on this one very nice work! Big Grin

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31-05-2008 12:57 Homepage of Ketz
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thanks for reviews everyone...big news...i received an offer from a singer from Texas who wants to colaborate on this one...she sent me her version of the vocal part...its gonna be massive, much better, much more energy...

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01-06-2008 16:12 Homepage of wrm
Wally D Wally D is a male
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The into pad is kinda lost in the back and needs to be brought out a bit.The drums seem to be right out of the box and do not have much character to them.The vocal sounds nice but a bit to dramatic for this type of tune.
The second half of this tune was a bit more interesting than the first.I like the groove change of the drums and the bassline is nice n low.Some of the noises where not needed(chirpy,bird sounds).They where a bit of a distraction from the tracks groove.Leave those out and see what is sounds like.
In the end this is not a bad track.Just eliminate some of the misplaced sounds and change up the style of vocal.

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02-06-2008 23:12 Homepage of Wally D
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