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Shinyuri Shinyuri is a male
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Please check out my new track 'New Yorker`s Jam' and post your comments here!!!

Easy now dnb.be heads!

sorry bout the whole absent ting - ive been without internet for a long time now - moving houses all the fukin time, scrounging for money etc etc, pure longness - i dunno if you guys know about it but i worked for a big company that went under and fuked over everyone in the process (Nova is the name of it, in Japan btw) but yeh, getting everything sorted again so i should be more constant on this site from now on.

so yeh anyways, been a long time since i posted somink up here so i thought ill giv this one a whirl. ive tried to be really anal with all the eqing and all that but my ears are just sik of listening to it anymore! anyways, any tips on anything about the tune is well welcomed, eqing, ideas etc etc. i think the intro is a bit long but hey - fuk it! all made on good ol reason 3!

seen a few new faces on ere too - much love for coming to the best dnb site there is (imo anyways)

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23-05-2008 12:12 Homepage of Shinyuri
Shinyuri Shinyuri is a male
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btw its only a preview! - i know it needs a 2nd part but im too lazy to do one until someone comments!

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23-05-2008 12:27 Homepage of Shinyuri
Gregg Gregg is a male
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Really cool shit, good sound quality. Tune has loads of punch in it!

Wicked basses! I really like the one more electro sounding…makes me think about combining electro with some dnb..hmm…anyway.
Great job mixing the different bass sounds with the filters and stuff… fits and flows pretty well.

What could be improved is the snare... I guess it would sound better with a boost in the higher frequencies.

What I’d like to hear later on in the track is a section with some fast hats…that’d be nice!

Looking forward to the final version!
23-05-2008 14:27 Homepage of Gregg
Tomos Tomos is a male
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The Shin Master General is back! Big Grin Dunno about anyone else, but I've definitely missed hearing your distinctive style on here man. Wink

OK then, about your tune... it's very nice, well produced. It builds up nicely and the drop is cool too. The intro is quite long, probably about 10 or 15 seconds too long for me. I reckon you could reduce the section from about .45 to 1.00. That part doesn't do much, imo. Also, I think the intro part would sound better if you stuck a low-sounding synth underneath the existing synths. The intro seems to be lacking some bassy low-end I reckon.

The kick is well EQed. It sits nicely in the mix. The snare, like Gregg said, could probably do with a touch more high end. Not much tho.

Basslines... nice! Good fat sound. There's just about enough sub in there too I reckon.

The beats, overall, are very solid and there's defo some cool little edits and tweaks in there. The only thing that was lacking a bit for me was some more dominant hi hats. I can hear some in the background but I deffo think they should be turned up to get the beats rolling even more. Don;t get me wrong tho, the beats are still very nice.

Nice work Captain. Big Grin Deffo looking forward to the final version!

Oh - why is it called New Yorker's Jam? There's usually a story behind your tune titles. Wink

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23-05-2008 19:00 Homepage of Tomos
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
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Welcome back drummerboy :-)

The intro is really airy reverb-ish and open, the drumkit is rather harsh, dark and dry. The contrast is a bit big maybe. Love the dark tearing basses a lot. Maybe the snare needs layering with a more shiny specimen. The Ghost hits sound pretty kick-style which makes them nearly unaudible when the bass is playing.

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23-05-2008 23:28 Homepage of BattleDrone
Ketz Ketz is a male
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Hi there Shinyuri, this is your first track I'm hearing on .be as I'm still relatively new here! Smile

Wicked synth madness from the start - cool FX as well! Loads of distorted sounds on the build up very nice.

Drop is heavy, really feeling the bass, and all the variations - they all gel very well together on all fronts (sound choice, melody etc)

Think the hihats could be a lil bit more prominent(think Tomos already brought that up!).

Overall theres not much to complain about, the production quality is top notch - and its re-boosted my confidence in Reason that you did all this on it - much respect! Bigup

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24-05-2008 10:21 Homepage of Ketz
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drumz sound like in a rock tune (in my case its a good ting)

brumz sound a little tubey ...at least on me headphones...weird...

Overall...bitching good stuff

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24-05-2008 12:11 Homepage of walcor
Shinyuri Shinyuri is a male
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n1 lads, cheers for all the good advice, will work on that snare and generally the drums, make the intro shorter and finish and repost - can always rely on the dnb.be lads for good comments!

yeh @ tomos - the name, i would like to say at least is because there was this rather amusing incident involving a new yorker, a jar of jam and a rather large industrial spoon... but alas is was just made in a coffee shop called the New Yorker - does a really good creamy caramel latte, mmmmmm

anyways, yeh @ walcor - im a drummer in a rock band (well a few pissheads meet up every saturday night and we proceed to make loud nonsence at least)

anyways, thanks once again for all the comments, peace

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25-05-2008 05:02 Homepage of Shinyuri
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this is awesome!
25-05-2008 14:59
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Really dig the intro. I think u should bring the reverb down on the snare a bit add a crunchier snare to it as well. love the drop! Very catchy. would like to hear where the bridge comes in to get a better vibe.
pretty descent over all
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25-05-2008 18:22 Homepage of BESHAI
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Err not really sure what to say about this?

Its not the sort of dnb that i would choose to buy but there we're some okay elements to it.

The intro was a little dragged out, try to be a bit more full on when you tackle ya intro, but your sound is your own so im not dissing ya style.

It can take years of trying to perfect a hook and style that works so keep crackin on and you'll find it if u aint already.

Dont really like writing negative comments, i hope you take it the right way and keep pushin ya music.
25-05-2008 22:44
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Now this is what I call a great intro. Dunno what on earth could you have done better there... Huh Well okay, it is a bit too long, but just a tiny bit. Some really cool, nicely fitting samples over there in the track too. Drop well made, the synth sounds a little dumb first, but you - in a way - get used to it... The background pads and that stuff is really, really nice.

The few complaints I have: The hihat hitting with the snare in the drop...
It just doesn't sound good to my ears. The beat is good when used in some heavy rock shit, but this is supposed to be drum n bass. Yeah, yeah...
I know the track is drum n bass, but still, this kind of lazy beats make me mad. Evil I also know, that there are some ghost snares. Imo you should turn 'em louder, that way the track would be much better... EDIT: Or is there? Am I losing my mind..?

Now I'll comment to myself in finnish. Tongue Sainpas avautua.
Thank you folks. Big Grin

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28-05-2008 17:29 Homepage of Puzzle
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our man out in the far east Big Grin

been a long while lets see what you've been upto.....

cool sounds to start......not much happening though......

oh here is the beat.........nice and punchy, sounds very muffled and woolly though, need to tame those lower mids and bring out the highs.

Not much other than the kick and snare, needs more filling to make it rool a little better imo
to the drop..........
LOL this has got your style all over it.......pretty cool change ups with the basses, nice variations

this is a wicked start for the track, just build on what you got and you'll be onto a micheal winner. Bigup

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i don't really like your choice of sounds...
but hey that's just me...
mastering is good, intro is too long indeed.. uhm..
well, i'm missing something.. maybe some hihats to fill up the drums?
cheers tho

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30-05-2008 00:14 Homepage of Rude
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