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Greyone Greyone is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Marijuana' and post your comments here!!!

clip from myspace (outro cut off)

style: dub jungle breakz
quality: 192kbs i guess

not my usual style
22-05-2008 14:52
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Drums are badly distorted which is too heavy for this style. The tempo change comes very sudden (scary). The whole thing seems to have quite some clashing sounds (especially the breaks part). The drums sound really cold because they seem to be compressed quite hard.


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22-05-2008 15:19 Homepage of BattleDrone
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Intro is awesome, jungle stylee, modified motion label style; but more dark
love it dont dig it when the drums come in, maybe too expreimental for me
but intro is sugar, very atmosperic well produced track in any way, sounded awesome through my speakers.

tested it on laptop speakers, on apple earphones, on bose earphones, on sony earphones, on stanton dj pro 1000.

all sounded well




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22-05-2008 17:11 Homepage of tryptech
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and intro , till what miniute (or second) is that Smile

thanks for the rapid feedback
22-05-2008 17:19
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cool idea , but the drums are totally off . altought bass and melody are good
keep it going m8
22-05-2008 17:59
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even though this is my favorite subject the bong sample is a little played out to be honest, however nature samples were an excellent choice and work well. the vocals are good but i've never been huge on vocal samples personally. the beat is maybe a little too sporadic for my tastes however it really does get much better about 2 minutes in and i'd work with that theme a little more. other than that my only complaint is that it pans too much to the right and really messes with the overall feel.
22-05-2008 19:29
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tom you should stop smoking and go back to your nasty roots you lazy bastard loool



hehehehe had a nice chill on that one ! cant judge it - just relaxed and listened Tongue


edit: fuck yeah man - you are in austria on the 4th july ??? i am so there and we wont stop drinking - hit me up on myspace ! cheers

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23-05-2008 00:51 Homepage of syneptic
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easy, awesome atmos and sample choice, well equed on that bit, well structured and placed. first bit reminded me of a cypress hill track - that bong sample eh! do agree with the others on the drumage, sort that eq! also there are lots of drum rollage here and there - try using different velocities to make it more lifelike. i liked the little bongo fill you got going on tho - that sounded sweet.

o shit it turned into a rave tune! 3;40 ish - what happened there!!! its cool tho! reminds me of 1992! could be another tune tho that part.

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23-05-2008 04:58 Homepage of Shinyuri
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tom you should stop smoking and go back to your nasty roots you lazy bastard loool



hehehehe had a nice chill on that one ! cant judge it - just relaxed and listened Tongue


edit: fuck yeah man - you are in austria on the 4th july ??? i am so there and we wont stop drinking - hit me up on myspace ! cheers


haha Big Grin yeah maybe i should smoke a bit less

hell yeah 4th july its gonna be a blast , i gonna play in Dom im berg now Smile , party of disko404 (zeck) and Jacques Prell and anotherone. i'll be there from 3 july till 5 july !
Big Grin Drummer wooot
23-05-2008 07:49
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nice mate !
but i thought its in the arcadium ?
dom im berg would be the WIKKIEST thing ever - nice location !
hit me up i will talk to the disko404 dudes !

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23-05-2008 15:42 Homepage of syneptic
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Like the other peeps are saying, the intro is great. Nice mellow hip hop vibe. But after that tho, the tune kinda goes in different directions. Also, the beats are really, really, squashed and compressed. The track as a whole isn't geling, imo, there's too many tempo and style changes. If this was my tune, I'd definitely stick to a hip hop vibe the whole way through. The intro is easily the best part.

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23-05-2008 20:07 Homepage of Tomos
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eazy mate - hits from the bong cypruss hill intro Big Grin

like the half speed hip hop intro, quite grotty feel to it

the drums when they drop are a bit distorted imo, a bit too mashed up

cool bongos - I always love bongos Big Grin

Overall its a mellow kinda vibe, one for the stoners (hence the name lol)

I think the structure could do with a bit more work, it seems to start and stop imo, neesds a bit more continuity to it

Not bad overall mate Big Grin

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Sorry to say but this aint my cuppa tea at all....

Agree with all that say the drums are distorted....

Not really understanding the tempo change or the original tempo, most jungle is a bit quicker than that, although oldskkol is about that bpm..

sorry to be hars, im tryin to be nice about all this......
25-05-2008 22:57
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