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Registration Date: 20-05-2008
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21-05-2008 18:17 |
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Gregg
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Registration Date: 16-05-2007
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Not bad.
The percussions are coo, though in parts a bit overbearing and covering the sub basses. I think they should be more upfront so give them a bit more texture or place another smooth but resonant sound underneath them.
I like the part when the tune gets some more distortions after the drop. Build up is cool, too.
Name fits pretty well, kinda funny that bumblebee theme you’ve chose.
Keep it up!
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21-05-2008 18:42 |
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deviant
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Originally posted by Gregg
Not bad.
The percussions are coo, though in parts a bit overbearing and covering the sub basses. I think they should be more upfront so give them a bit more texture or place another smooth but resonant sound underneath them.
I like the part when the tune gets some more distortions after the drop. Build up is cool, too.
Name fits pretty well, kinda funny that bumblebee theme you’ve chose.
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thx! 
the title refers to a classical piece by Rimsky-Korsakov - The Flight of the Bumblebee
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y41DykcpgRg&feature=related
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21-05-2008 19:10 |
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Philthy McNasty
Florida DnB Masta!
Registration Date: 23-07-2006
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Intro is pretty cool percs are right on. Im not really sure about the bee sound, it needs to be retweaked to flow better. Once it drops, I was a lil disappointed. I thought the bass u had going in the beginning was gonna go off. I would rethink this tune, cause the bass work in the intro was pretty sweet, you should go more with that. Also, I heard ALOT of clipping in the bass. Not bad, but needs work.
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