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tryptech tryptech is a male
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Please check out my new track 'D_phonics-Black Diamond RMX' and post your comments here!!!

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18-05-2008 21:30 Homepage of tryptech
djphrenzy
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Pretty nice tune man! It's got a funky kinda vibe to it. I felt like the part where the synth comes in from a high pass needed something underneath it... perhaps some kind of ambient noise. I think after the drop there could be some stuff to thicken it up a bit.

Other than that, nice stuff! Big Grin

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18-05-2008 22:00 Homepage of djphrenzy
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The bass is plain weird, the drums sound a bit narrow eq'ed (high end is cut off). Track has a healthy weirdness, but I'dd choice a different bass.
Track gets repetitive soon.
The last 20 seconds are just empty Confused

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19-05-2008 16:19 Homepage of BattleDrone
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beats are a little empty, could do with more hits to fill out the sound and beef up the track a little. bass sounds are great and the overall production seems good, i like the synth sound and the filters applied to them and the vocal sample is brilliant. needs a sub pattern underneath the main bass riff to really give it that 'oomph'.
the only thing letting this track down is the beats, they seem tinny and bare, maybe add some compression and eq with added hits to help them roll better. the drum roll however is alot better and has more depth to it.

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20-05-2008 01:42
cynik cynik is a male
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digging the bassline, real slow neuro schizz. sounchoices could be better all over. the beats are really thin and need som elayering. instead of a lot of hats, I'd concentrate on making the kick and snare punch and then add some sparse hats. the high synth that comes in the drop has got a lot of stereo. Id redo the drop too just filtering the bassline

this tunes got potential. I do like it, keep at it!

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20-05-2008 07:57 Homepage of cynik
Tomos Tomos is a male
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Overall, a nice tune. Like Battle said, there's a healthly amount of weirdness here. But a few things need some attention...

The beats are pretty thin. They deffo need to be heavier and fatter. They're not rolling at the mo. Try experimenting by layering a few loops on top of it.

There's deffo too much stereo panning going on with the high end. It splits the track in half.

A louder, bigger sub bass would certainly improve the main bassline. Itd give it a fatter sound for sure.

Good tune tho, I enjoyed it. Nice experimental shizzle going on here. Big Grin

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23-05-2008 20:33 Homepage of Tomos
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eazy mate. crazy bass drop - completely took me by surprise - in a good way!

agree on the beats with everyone - a couple layers are needed to acheive a fuller sounds

going back to the bassline - IMO I would like to see it develop into something slightly more melodic as the tune progresses - just to give the listener that sense of fulfilment (thats just my personal views tho!)

Overall some cool sounds all put together to make a very interesting tune!

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24-05-2008 12:58 Homepage of Ketz
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