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djphrenzy
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Please check out my new track 'Braneworld' and post your comments here!!!

Just something I started on today. Perhaps a little darker than my normal fare.

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18-05-2008 03:35 Homepage of djphrenzy
Tomos Tomos is a male
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Yep, I like this new style from you. That bass sound (and melody) is excellent, really nice. Definitely reminds me of Ed Rush. The tune could do with one or two breakdowns and build-ups I reckon, to give it extra drama. The only thing I didn't like was the percussion loop (TC?). It really sounds out of place in my opinion, and it's a little too obvious where it came from. The beats are ok but could be heavier I reckon. Good patterns and edits tho.

Excellent tune mate, again. Big Grin

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18-05-2008 09:28 Homepage of Tomos
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very nice...

the screaming synth could be a little quieter or shorter when the bass comes in...on my headphones it ate up the beats...the bass part was really good!!! the synth annoyed me a little...

as I like soft and dark tunes...this really moved me

Overall excellent work...i like it

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18-05-2008 11:25 Homepage of walcor
tryptech tryptech is a male
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Huge track, maybe some phase on teh drums, could that, snare sounds phased. Hihats are very concord dawn stylish
good drum work, crispy
dont like the part too much where the rumls stop
little empty
nice main part
love the growling bass
definitely pro

cheerz

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18-05-2008 21:36 Homepage of tryptech
goonybag goonybag is a male
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love the intro, lovely synths and atmos going on, building nicely, need a vox sample or something in the break at 45 seconds, seems empty. nice filter on the bassline intro, in fact, nice bassline. does not overly stand as a big impact drop but works in a subtle, dark kinda way. overall a nice track with good production skills, some breaks would only add to it with some dirty distorted shit. enjoy it indeed i do Smile

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19-05-2008 10:43 Homepage of goonybag
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The pads are drowning in reverb and seem to make the overall track a bit muddy. Maybe you should cut off the low end a bit more and/or lower their level a bit (just see what works). Track misses drive when at full force.
Good choice of sounds.

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19-05-2008 16:16 Homepage of BattleDrone
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some nice stuff this, dunno bout the TCish thing (i dont really listen to him) but the drums sound nice - lots of cool change ups - would prefer more on the bass tho tbh - maybe filter it or somink? how bout ditching the intro screamish noise when the bass kiks in and replace it with somink more dirty - dirty like a rotten fish which was soaked in gravy. anyways, once again, cool track.


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20-05-2008 09:14 Homepage of Shinyuri
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Yea man, not bad production, lackin some percussion...eg cymbals and stuff but not bad!
20-05-2008 21:25
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i like the intro pad and drums but in the main part drums are weak for me.
but the growling bass and structure are good
21-05-2008 18:51
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hey there hows it goin. i like that synth lead from the start pads have a dark edginess to em, good moody atmo.

nice bass when it drops, good choice of sound, well produced

congas work well with the beat

think that you could possibly vary some of the synth melodies that u used from the intro all the way thru the main part of the tune - possibly overused?

overall sounds pretty good tho!

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24-05-2008 12:46 Homepage of Ketz
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wicked start, big sounds and beats.

that dissonant stab is fucking ace.

maybe needed a big sound to signal the breakdown, which as i listen is nice and creapy, building wicked for that drop,
nice drop, i think you should drop everything out for 2 bars to get more impact though.
that bass is ripping, sounds very much like another track that i can't place my finger on.

This track would sound at home on something like DSC14 (or whatever it is)

The way it changes up after a little really works too.

Mate this is wicked, the mix could be a tiny bit cleaner but still top tune Bigup

time for another listen Big Grin

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On the drop..........where that last high sounding dissonant stab sounds at 1.23, drop the other sound then bring them back for the drop. i think that'd work a fucking treat and really make the drop bigger.

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29-05-2008 12:13 Homepage of D2o
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