Nice intro...have an old trance track i made that has a similar vibe...relaxing sound...tough a little more change would be nice imo...but its good as it is...i just like changes...sounds good on my 5.1 headphones...
if it came from the radio I would listen to it defo...
Very good structure. The way you build up the melodies is excellent and your beats are much better than your previous efforts. They sound punchy, although the kick still needs some more low thumpage cos it's a little thin right now. Their are no complaints with this mate. The thing I notice with your tunes tho, including this one, is that they sound very centred. You need to think about widening the sound a little (not too much tho!) and adding a touch of panning to a few of the sounds. If used correctly, it can can really another dimension to your tunes. It's great to see/hear a fella of your age with such musical skills. Keep on progressing!
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My god you're doing GCSEs, keep on producing and you'll be banging out some heavy tunes in the next few years. Not that this isn't good. It's okay, got some nice trancy sounds going on and a nice warm simple bass line that go well together.Like the piano too.
I feel that it gets a bit samey though and could do with more variation in melody.
Beats are okay but again could do with a bit more chop and change to keep it interesting. Im definitely no expert though and would see what some of the more experienced producers on here think
hello mate and before i start - good luck with ur GCSEs!
like the pads and synths in the intro, cool beat as well, quit a euphoric sound, i like the bass when it comes - slightly sudden, could do with a bit of a build up..
melodies are sweet, love it!
suggestions- possibly more variations on the drums? also a slightly harder (not necessarily darker) synth to give it sum "umph"