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InsidiousX 
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Registration Date: 07-02-2008
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Please check out my new track 'Vertigo' and post your comments here!!!
Another jump up track
Taken care of a few problems/complaints/glitches or ideas with the tune.
more ideas are welcome, thanks
please vote n comment
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Forget liquid, jump up and darkside drum n bass is the way forward!
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14-05-2008 18:47 |
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Tomos
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Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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Since you now have a new version of this track, do you want me to delete your previous version? It'll ensure that peeps focus on this version, rather than the old one.
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14-05-2008 19:11 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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The lead sound needs some freaking out, some high stabs, call and answer basses... more wickedness should be added.
This is a very good starting point to have a wicked tune, but it's still missing a catchy hook.
Overall mixdown lacks bottom end, snare could do with a bit more "body"
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15-05-2008 14:39 |
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Gregg
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Registration Date: 16-05-2007
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This track could be much more powerful and kicking with better eq and compression.
it’s way to calm and sounding like it was coming out of some crapy notebook speakers with no bass reproduction at all.
Put a compressor on the master channel and turn up its gain and boost the low frequ of your kick/ add a sub.
What also needs work is the structure. There is no real intro or break or something and it gets boring real quick. A catchy hook, as suggested, would be good and think about adding some more elements. Or at least add some more effects like reversing or a flanger or whatever to create some variation.
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19-05-2008 19:46 |
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raversie
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Registration Date: 19-05-2008
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overall a great upbeat track, nicely broken up with drum rolls and added fx although there was a slight hiss on the drums (is it just me?).
The bass patterns are nice, not too repetetive as is the addition of atmospheric sounds at key points in the track. Production and Mastering are top notch but in my opinion the sub needs a slight boost to really get you jumping, especially when the extra hats kick in.
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20-05-2008 01:31 |
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