drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » walcor - Broken Dreams (pe final cut) walcor - Broken Dreams (pe final cut) Author Post walcor by walcor Registration Date: 14-02-2008 Posts: 140 Helpfulness rating:  Please check out my new track 'Broken Dreams (pe final cut)' and post your comments here!!! so I tweaked it a little and lost the weird dirty part and went for a more relaxing tune...hope it worked out...any suggestions before I make this one final take a listen and u know the rest, vote it to be the best... just kidding vote as you like Cheers This track has been deleted on the producer's request __ walcor on last.fm walcor on SoundCloud 14-05-2008 18:45 InsidiousX True Raver Registration Date: 07-02-2008 Posts: 50 Helpfulness rating:  in general this is a decent tune. personally i dont like it im more of a jump up/darkside fan. this tune is a bit too liquid for me so i find it hard to comment. its well produced tho in my opinion, nice track __ Forget liquid, jump up and darkside drum n bass is the way forward! 14-05-2008 18:53 Vectrex Benzin Registration Date: 05-02-2008 Posts: 118 Helpfulness rating:  nice sound! especially the drums sound great __ Vectrex on Soundcloud Vectrex on Facebook 14-05-2008 20:31 Gregg Wicked Producer Registration Date: 16-05-2007 Posts: 417 Helpfulness rating:  I’m pretty impressed by the sound quality, it’s pretty good I think. Clean mix down! Drums sound neat with the right amount of punch and I like you sub bass. I’d kill that “yo” vocal in the intro, think it’s to rough destroying the relaxed atmosphere. You could eventually make your melodies fit better to the vocal cause from time to time the singer is off and it makes him look like he couldn’t sing and hit the right notes. Cool vocal edits in the beginning and at 4:07 though I have to admit they remind me of that one FL demo tune. That bassline appearing from 1:28 could use some tweaking, melody and sound wise. Overall this is cool, I enjoyed listening! 15-05-2008 20:18 walcor by walcor Registration Date: 14-02-2008 Posts: 140 Helpfulness rating:  Gregg- yes the vocals are from the fl demo...since there are no sound studios near where I live, I had to make due with them...tho I would someday like to use some of my original vocals...thats the problem I have so many ideas for vocals but no resources to realize them (no studio, Im not that good of a singer, plus none of my friends can either)...so forgive me if the vocals are off key some times...its just to give a view of what I intended __ walcor on last.fm walcor on SoundCloud 16-05-2008 07:40 Tomos Infidel Registration Date: 15-04-2007 Posts: 2,276 Helpfulness rating:  This version is sounding better now cos it's a lot more coherent. The vocals are sounding pretty good, although on one or two ocassions they seem to be out of tune with the background melody. It's not a big deal tho. I like the beats. The deep bass stabs are very good too. You should actually turn those up I reckon. Nice work. __ MySpace | Soundcloud | Drumnbass.be | Facebook "It is far better to grasp the Universe as it really is than to persist in delusion, however satisfying and reassuring." Carl Sagan 16-05-2008 18:40 brucifer Making all the tunes your mum loves Registration Date: 23-10-2007 Posts: 997 Helpfulness rating:  sound quality sounds fantastic I think ya drums and vocals are a little loud. Can't really hear the sub... Drop: More sub on the bass, bit of eq needed. Sounds nice though. 2.36: Not keen on the synth sound, but that is just me. 3.20 The track has lost momentum really. 3.40 ish.. Maybe incorperate the reece earlier in the track, sounds like you have mixed another tune in. Not over keen on this style, but that is taste. Not a bad track though. __ 18-05-2008 02:34 Ketz Thinking outside the box... Registration Date: 10-10-2007 Posts: 2,865 Helpfulness rating:  eazy Walcor - I'm a lquid style lover so already feelin this one. very nice work with the beat from the start, almost reminds me of good ol EZ Rollers kinda vibe cool flanger on the beat at 1:45 i think all of the elements work pretty well, nice variations on the beat here n there, all thats missing is a proper sing (or hum-along) bass lead, i dont think that it is prominent enough in my opinion. but overall, very nice vibe you've created, a very enjoyable listen! oh btw not sure if the reese at the end works.. also i think the structure kinda loses its way towards the end __ 19-05-2008 16:46 spoogie07 Producer Registration Date: 20-05-2008 Posts: 13 nice and progressive, vocal loses me a lil sometimes. Decent sound overall 20-05-2008 21:26 infarkt Tourist Registration Date: 14-07-2007 Posts: 12 nice easy roller , drums and bass are very good. but vocals should be a bit louder 21-05-2008 18:55 drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » walcor - Broken Dreams (pe final cut)