 hydro-plane - Bureied Structure  |
hydro-plane 
Producer
Registration Date: 26-10-2003
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Please check out my new track 'Bureied Structure' and post your comments here!!!
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josh voinar
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30-01-2004 05:27 |
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Muad'Dib
Andrejnalin
Registration Date: 02-12-2003
Posts: 4,197
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Well, nice tune.. but little cold.. not much "real sound" in it, like electronica.. or something like that...
The kick is way too loud - decrease it a little...
The snare is hard to be heard cause of the hats.. add compression on the snare, to add to its power...
The tune is becoming boring after 2 minutes.. maybe cause of the same sounds used on and on... variations, young Jedi, variations..
The beat is danceable, for sure! Juz little change the things here, and it will be worthy! 
Cheerz - Muad'Dib
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30-01-2004 18:42 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Good use of the reece.
Kick sounds too "commercial dancetrack" like imo
The snare needs a boost indeed
The sub is too loud.
The female is overused a bit.
Structurewise: needs a lot of work: the buildup is quite messy, as is the rest of the track's structure. You just add elements and remove others, but you're not telling a story. Work on that.
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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