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CLARKFADER
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yeah , killer track , ha ha , nice , but im sure someone will say the intro is too long , but all the same nice , love the killer variation at the end , the kik needs some more presence , its a bit flat !!!
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12-05-2008 13:51 |
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CULTURE BOY 
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been a long time jimmy!
that intro has got some bad boy pottential, very very nice.
drop kicks in sweet n sound nice n big! finish this cos it sounds like its gonna be big.
big ups cb
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12-05-2008 14:40 |
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walcor
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indeed creepy
intro is a bit long for my taste but I can see the killer creepin in the streets 
nice and creepy
maybe add some even darker bass there...but as its a preview u probably will in the second drop...?!
but its missing sth imo...
guess when its finished it will have everything it needs
go on, finish it
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12-05-2008 15:18 |
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freestyle
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FUCKINHELL!!!!!
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12-05-2008 16:28 |
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Sephiroth
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creepy intro, liking that some real nice sounds in there, sets the scene nicely, intro is pretty long, maybe a few extra sounds would keep it a bit more interesting. sounds real nice tho, like a horror movie.
drop is pretty cool, drums are solid and clear, some fx maybe a little loud tho, kinda drown other elements out,
liking the glithy drum variations, very nice indeed!
track has defo got sum potential me reckons, could turn out to be a real banger!
nice work man!
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12-05-2008 16:48 |
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djphrenzy
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Wow... that bass sounds just like this DJ Ascend track called something like Micron or Microtek (it's been a while!) from '97.
Love the intro.
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12-05-2008 17:16 |
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Gregg
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Wow ! (third „wow“ in this thread
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That bassline….100% pure evilness! Good one!
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12-05-2008 18:22 |
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Halph-Price
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i personally woulda put in some footstep sound,s if you need some i can give a link, it helps, slow footsteps and some breathing just makes it seem so much closer and in your face, but if you fade int eh steps and breating, like my "wolf comes if a smile http://www.drumnbass.be/vote.html?id=2985&d=1" track, it works nicly. but the footsteps help put it into context. i know what it's like to want to do a cool sound scape, it really adds to the track.
too bad that bass sounds lame, doesn't sound evil, sounds cheesy. it's too warm, it needs to be deeper, with less of the mids stuf there. i dunno how you do yuor wobble, but it makes the the distorted part of the bass totally lose all sense of pitch.
but for it being the only instrument in the whole song itself, played the entire song, you might wnat to either rethink the sound of it, or rethink of much you use it. and maybe doing a drop would help make it sound good too.
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12-05-2008 18:46 |
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Tomos
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Massive movie soundtrack potential here! Wow (another wow), that's pretty dark, evil stuff. Love it.
Yeah like you said, some heavy breathing would sound very nice in there. Try some loudish heart beats too and perhaps some footsteps. (I have a couple of heartbeat and breathing samples if you want them, from the Fear sample pack). I did a track a while ago (it wasn't dnb so I never posted it here) where I started out with some loudish heartbeats in the intro and them morphed them into kicks, and built up the beat...
In terms of direction, I reckon you shouldn't switch it too much, just really build up the intensity and darkness. Start adding a few extra FX and dark synth melodies. Also, I'd get about 2 or 3 different distorted bass sounds and switch them ocassionally.
Like Clarky said, I think the kick needs a little tweakage. Somehow, it's not thumping enough I reckon. Also, the bassline sounds like it needs an extra layer to occupy the low-mid range - perhaps a reese-like sound? It's sounding a tad empty at the mo, but it wouldn't take much to put it right.
Excellent start tho mate. 
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12-05-2008 18:48 |
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CULTURE BOY
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12-05-2008 19:53 |
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Xinou
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Not really original to reply with, but: Wow!
The intro is just perfect, and i really like the way you bring in the breaks! Well served!
The 'dragging' bass thing is one of my personal favorites and i find that it fits really good in your track.
At the end of the track i think it would be nice if you'd bring in some lower bass frequencies to push it just a little more!
I'm totally new at this forum/site as well to drum 'n bass producing but i really like this 
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12-05-2008 22:39 |
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BattleDrone
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Intro is sick. Good buildup. I would have used a more cutting edge bass (needs to be scary too) and would have made a more nerve wrecking melody with it.
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12-05-2008 22:52 |
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brucifer
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Nice intro Ghost. Bit long though, but cool. Maybe start some hats in it a bit earlier.
Wow mate drop. Your a bad man!
Maybe put a few more mid frequancies in the bass.
Really like the drums, bring the percussion forward a bit.
Nice mate
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18-05-2008 02:25 |
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lusticals
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i like the intro very killer like. two thumbs up
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18-05-2008 13:27 |
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goonybag
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yeh,darkmoody intro. is that a kookaburra in there? represent australia! i think it is! solid drop for sure,"killa" vox sample is cool, soare the slicertype effects on the first break. maybe beef up those basslines a little, would add more impact to the overall sound. great start dude, nicely done
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19-05-2008 10:50 |
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Philthy McNasty
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Whats up Jimmy C. Good too hear a new tune from ya. Even tho the intro is a lil long for my taste it is eerie as shit. Cool lil vocal snippet before the drop. The bass is pretty nasty, but sounds like it could use something else, but cant really put my finger on what.Nice lil preview, want to here the finished version.
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19-05-2008 13:46 |
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PsychoFX
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it is a good track! a rolling one!
i just add here some things i recognized:
the intro is fine. hearing some strange sounds not knowing where they gonna take you. bass frequencies are awesome! the rain sample or what ever it is sounds good!
the beat drops in and after the drop:
i would prefer a louder kick! or maybe another sample - one that smashes more through! the rest sound good. maybe add more low frequency boost to the snare. but you do not have to.
the bass sounds awesome. but what about adding a more darker or even another bass sample? i think that the bass is a little bit too nice for the track!
sub is fine!
i think it would be good to add a synth melody or any kind of melody as an answer part to the darker bass parts. just an idea.
cheers
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