amm...try some changes in melody...too consistent imo...some interesting vibes here, but the consistency drove me nuts...laking some preasence...
long intros...not my thing, like to keep it under a minute...but thats my opinion...
i personaly think this is a veryy good track, it has a good overall sound and kept me interested, keep that up man.
thanks.
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Yes, nice track again. I'm still liking the industrial, minimalist vibes. But this version is suffering a little in the sound quality department. What's most noticeable to me is how thin the kick sounds. The snare is too thin as well, imo. How are you creating your beats? In particular, what are you doing to the kick? I'd love to hear those down tuned bassline turned up! They really sound good, you should make more use of them. I'd give them some distortion too while you're at it. Keep working at it bro.
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Really nice dark shizzle. Lacks a bit of variation later on... Could do with some vocal bits (no movie dialogs please, just some stabs). Some freaky synth lead. Dark bass stabs,...
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The sub bassline was just a quick add, no real thought into it. I have actually done another mix with a distorted b line, which is more along the line of Decoder or Tech Itch 98ish style.
Tomos - NO idea what is going on with the kick and snare. Sound alright here
I might try mixing a few new ones in with it.
BattleDrone - Know what you mean about vocal stabs
, Might start looking..
freestyle - CHeers brov. Thanks for listening
walcor - Thanks for listening. It's not reall a complete track, more a few idea. Thank again
EDIT: (evil little cackle
) This new bass line I'm working is just sick!!! Look out for the new upload soon.
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This post has been edited 4 time(s), it was last edited by brucifer: 13-05-2008 07:43.
13-05-2008 00:25
CLARKFADER unregistered
yeah , i agree with the others , the sound dont seem right mate , needs alot of tweeking and boosting , cut down the intro , or put more fx to it , dark thou , nice !!!!!!!!!!
orite Bruce! was already feelin this tune from the last version, lets see what improvments uve made..
on the intro, i reackon its a tad too lond, withthe percussion hits then the kick dropping - i suggest either a shorter intro with the percussion bit of possibly use the full beat from the start.
love the actuall beat good work with the kick, very thumpy kinda feel to it. nice pitch bending on the bass too
i think you still need a proper nasty synth lead to give this tune its hook (incoporate that every 4 or 8 bars?). at the mo i thinks thats the main thing missing
by the way- have u removed that crazy synth fx sound from the previous version??! put it back in there -i thought that was wicked!
I might try mixing a few new ones in with it.
, Might start looking..
) This new bass line I'm working is just sick!!! Look out for the new upload soon. 
