 walcor - Deep in Dance (ver2) |
walcor 
by walcor
Registration Date: 14-02-2008
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Please check out my new track 'Deep in Dance (ver2)' and post your comments here!!!
hi
So I took tomos-es advice and lost the vocals...mixed it up a bit, used some new effects, camepaht3 and camelspace1.4...beefed up the beats and subs...added some extra ghost hats...so I think this one is better...oh and added a harpo synth to the end fx-ed with camelspace
so tell me what U think
Feedback please 
This track has been deleted on the producer's request
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09-05-2008 21:10 |
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BattleDrone
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The break you use is too much in the background, the kick could still be better (it's a bit soft now).
Nice melodies, track improved a great deal.
Try to find synth presets you like and then tweak them untill you get an own sound, some of your current sounds are a bit too much "middle of the road" now.
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09-05-2008 23:21 |
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Tomos
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Yep, this is deffo a big improvement on your previous version. Well done captain. 
I'd still lose those vocals at the very start. I don't think they add anything to the track, imo, and they sound out of key.
Beats are sounding good. I reckon the kick sounds good. Maybe it's a tad quiet compared to the snare tho, but not by much, perhaps a nat's pube.
Mate, this is sounding very good indeed. There's lot of crisp, warm sounds in there. You've got a decent amount of sub (it's a tiny bit quiet if anything). It's very pleasant to listen to. The only things that need tweaking are some of the levels I reckon. For me, the snare is a tiny bit too loud, so too are the rhodes, the hi hats and shuffles are a little too quiet. Also, the rhodes are panned too wide, imo.
But yeah, well done. Really enjoying the vibes in this. Good melodies throughout, it gels together nicely.
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10-05-2008 14:48 |
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walcor
by walcor
Registration Date: 14-02-2008
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10-05-2008 17:03 |
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Muad'Dib
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snare is imo too loud... other stuff is great, if only that snare wasn't so in tha face, if ya know what I mean...
otherwise, very nice song.
not having much time atm for writing 
it's 5 am
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11-05-2008 05:01 |
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brucifer
Making all the tunes your mum loves
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Really like the intro. Sound like some old bukem.
NOt to sure about the drums. They sound a bit dirty for this style of track. Maybe add some more ghost snares and kicks.
Add a bit more sub base.
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12-05-2008 09:02 |
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