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cynik 
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first of all damn you for killing william wallace!
lol..... "bad guy shanx"
oooooooooh I'm scared!
are you a chav junglist? dunno, your myspazz is suspiciously glittery
the review
the sound is very generic. loops are very identifiable. boring, easily forgettable melodies and random placement of vocal snips. woman singing is tottaly out of the blue in foundations. ah thats a remix then
the sound is not that bad man. Its just it all sounds piled up, Id work around those ideas some more
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06-05-2008 23:17 |
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BattleDrone
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Your drums are not always at the same level
That melody you do on the first bass (Irish pig) doesn't work, it sounds all too random.
Drums sound muffled.
Repetitive.
Bad guy shanx: you do nothing with the drums, it just loops and reverses... no edits or anything. That pitching midbass is not working for me. Your drum buildups sound like happy house rather than DnB
Foundationz: again a drumloop, again reversed. Singin' chick... dunno. (watch out with copyrights) doesn't seem to fit with the intro. Like Cynik said, you seem to be using building blocks rather than composing. It's no good if the drums disappear and reappear like that, there's no buildup.
Street musician: nicely sampled, but it's a dead end street, this tune doesn't have any potential, it's a mishmash of samples, they don't glue, there's no story, no concept, it even sounds like 2 tracks at once.
Give feedback on some tunes, apply for producer rights, make ONE tune, put in a lot of effort and get full feedback on here. I warn you, the road to the top is a bumpy one.
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06-05-2008 23:38 |
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Greyone
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good tunage i guess , im listening on low volume now.
good to be standard uk stuff , nothing special though.
dunno if thats typical for the style but all your drums sound like muffled , it doesnt 'bang'
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06-05-2008 23:48 |
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