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Seven Gun Seven Gun is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Conscious Discipline' and post your comments here!!!

A long long time out of the game.

i'm back now and nicely refreshed.

this is something of how i am feeling at the moment. control your mind and way of thinking.

anyways, hit me up with some phat reviews..
dont you know... "i am one of the masters... BASTARDS"

big up!


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02-05-2008 19:17
CULTURE BOY CULTURE BOY is a male
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refreshing! i like the was all this happens. i knackered n cant review propperly lol.

liking the simplistic take on things and think they work well!

ambiance is a personal fave tho bro!

big ups n glad to have ya back!

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02-05-2008 20:34 Homepage of CULTURE BOY
tryptech tryptech is a male
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hi 7G

euhm like the atmos you create, beats are really celar and sharp, but little too upfront in te mix, coulf dow ith some nice filtered highs maybe,

By the way here are het files for the RMX
http://www.megaupload.com/nl/?d=RRNHNPNQ

i loaded them up to megaupload

cheerz

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02-05-2008 20:48 Homepage of tryptech
Tomos Tomos is a male
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Ah, so that explains all those reviews today. I shoulda known... Wink

Yeah, I'm liking this moody, dark-ish, vibey style of track from you. I actually prefer this style to your wobbles.

The vocal is excellent. It really gives the tune a focus and some humaness to it. Only thing I would suggest with that is to add some more effects on it, just to spice it up. It's coming out a little dry at the mo. Some delay would definitely help.

Beats are ok. I'm not so keen on the snare tho - it's very dry and there's not enough bounce in it. Very good work with the hi hats and rides tho. Kick is ok but maybe a bit too boomy. It's also clipping a bit, which I'm guessing is caused by it being too loud?

Bassline. Nice, it fits well but it needs to work a little more to make it more interesting. It sits too far back in the mix. I reckon it should be brought out and spiced up.

I'm feeling this tho. Maybe I could even give it the EQ-remix tweakage?? Are you up for sending me the FL folder? Big Grin

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02-05-2008 21:31 Homepage of Tomos
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great atmos and vocals. Drums sound clear and punchy, they could use some more variation though.

Not sure if the kick is clipping or if it is a high hat hitting and the same time as the kick...

These raindrops thingies add a sweet feeling to the tune, giving it more expression and makes the tune to a unique copy.
How did you manage that they sound like they were in a little distance to the rest? that's cool!

DOn't like the bass too much. The sound actually fits but it seems to be kinda powerless. The low end seems to be too low. without a subwoover I wouldn't even notice that there is one.

Anyways, I like this pretty much but not as much as you sick wobbles! Keep it up, cheerz!



02-05-2008 21:51 Homepage of Gregg
Seven Gun Seven Gun is a male
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Originally posted by Tomos

I'm feeling this tho. Maybe I could even give it the EQ-remix tweakage?? Are you up for sending me the FL folder? Big Grin


lol


yeah, i boosted the kick at the last minute. thnx for the heads up.

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02-05-2008 21:51
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Dripping water sample is kinda cut off at the end.
The female vocal could do with a bit more clarity.
The main part kinda sneaks into the intro, there's no clear drop or anything.
Good main drums.
Drum breakdown around 2:28 is messy.
Good buildup after breakdown, but the track seems to repeat itself more or less.
Nice roller, needs a tweak here and there.


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Yo

Good to have you back brother

Nice dark vibes man, not something Ive come to expect from you but really liking the change in direction

Standout part for me is the beats - Really like the groove with the ride cymbal. made me think of an upbeat Ni ten ichi ryu kinda vibe.

Like the bass but could be a bit subbier and a little less resonant for me.

Good stuff

Peas



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03-05-2008 15:44 Homepage of Binary Havoc
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nice to hear something a bit different from you mate,

beat is chunky, kick has got big kahoona's Big Grin

the snare could do with a light touch of airy reverb as all the samples are quite reverby. and because the mix is quite minimal in places add a nice long reverb to the last snare every 4 or 8 bars.
could add a nice touch i reckon.
in fact the ride and hats could benefit from some well placed reverb.
If im honest im not too keen on the bass sound. would add a more warpy reese type jobby but thats a personal preference.

But cool tune squire. Sounding top notch Bigup

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recognise that carbone break (i think its carbone), intro pads are nice and 'slammin' fx are good, create a good feeling of tension.
tune seems to just go into the drop without any real build-up, some fx or a kick build would help it to flow a bit better.
bass is a little weak imo, not enough sub to really help it stand out.
female vocal sample is lush, fits really well, loving that a lot.
arrangment is decent, not enough variation to it tho i reckon, maybe some different breakdown sections would spice it up a bit.
kick could maybe do with another layer to give it more punch, sounds a little padded and flat to my ears.
decent track overall, mix is nice and clear and everything has its place, got some potential with some tweaks hear and there, bass defo needs boosting in the sub range tho.

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04-05-2008 16:25 Homepage of Sephiroth
Ketz Ketz is a male
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Hello mate, im still relatively new to .be so this is the 1st tune of yours that I'm hearing! Cool intro beat, not too sure if the vocal fits that well. Think the snare could be a lil more phat. mad sounding bass there - very nice!

a few fx here n there would be nice to fill up the space a bit. overall production quality i think very neat n tidy, impressive Bigup

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05-05-2008 13:19 Homepage of Ketz
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yeah, nice production, phat track overall, z trip is how I would describe it if that makes any sense, nice for listening, minimilistic, breaks, and groove, sounds good though
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easy now, liking the beats ere man, u going away from the wobbly stuff then? agree with what tomos and battledrone say bout it too. that said - its a proper naughty little dance floor number, i would definately have to wear my moody face to this one (well its meant to be moody but it looks more retarded)

sos i aint been round ere much to comment on ur tunage mate, its been tough trying to get to an internet cafe. what u rekon is your best tune you`ve done recently?

later on

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20-05-2008 08:57 Homepage of Shinyuri
BESHAI BESHAI is a male
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Really like the mix on the kick n snare. like bass sound as well really smooth. Has a nice dark feel to the song. Would like to hear maybe some more layers with the drop. like more sfx or another pad. maybe? Vocal sample is pretty descent like when the song opens up on the 2nd drop alot th

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25-05-2008 18:14 Homepage of BESHAI
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Ive been making tracks for years but new to this site, jeeez, this tune is bold!

Beats are simple and crisp (i like it) Bassline is really infectious.

I used to MC to dnb before turning to production so i love a tune to roll to!

Youve obviously been arind so no need to say much else.

Keep it up!
25-05-2008 22:51
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