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CLARKFADER
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Please check out my new track 'collab with binary havoc "BARRICADE" ' and post your comments here!!!

hi , this is my version of binary havoc`s "BARRICADE" , need your input , definitely needs more work , so before i`ll finish it , please can you give me your opinion !!!!! quite different from the original , most of the samples r from the original , but this is my take on it , remixed this in a day , so its not going to be perfect , made on acid pro 6 !!!!!!


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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by CLARKFADER: 29-04-2008 13:14.

28-04-2008 22:35
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interesting tune

pretty empty in the start. could benifit from more effects perhapse.

i like the drop. really nice dark atmosphere's.

drums are cool. i think kick and snare might be a bit too loud though. but im not to sure about that.

good tune so far .

cheers!

29-04-2008 04:11
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nice tune. the build up is well worked and structured . nice atmos's an good key range. snare is slightly louder than i expected when it kiks but the beats on the whole a full an well structured. to be honest i was actually waiting for a reese line or summit to really kill it on the drop. more bass pls! very good if you did do this in one day, but defo needs more umph in the drop.....biggups....fat beats my friend ...
29-04-2008 18:35
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build up and pads in intro are nice and atmospheric, a little boring tho maybe could use more fx or drums to build the tension a bit more.
kick and snare are nice and clear, percussion behind drums is nice and frantic too, helps keep things rolling.
takes a far while build up, not grabbing my interest as it could be doing with more sounds and more insteresting variation.
structure and arangment of track in general is a little predictable and it never really seems to take off imo. needs something to really define the drop like some heavy bass.
not bad work tho.

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01-05-2008 11:53 Homepage of Sephiroth
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I'm really likin this tune once it gets past the intro, which is a bit empty like Seph said. The main melodies are excellent, quite hynotic and dark. You've got the right idea with the beats too cos they're flowing nicely. However, I think you need to work on the overall mix cos it sounds like there's too much reverb. The kick is very quiet and the snare is too dry and upfront. Also, the bass deffo needs more highs. It's very far back in the mix and much too quiet. I reckon you should really bring that out and let it become the focus of the tune. Overall tho, a decent tune.

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02-05-2008 22:47 Homepage of Tomos
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sup mr fader! yeah intro sounds cool, more effects get some more atmosphere there (the dark pad/s is/are cool, just layer the FX and ur there)

Nice beat. Now you need a proper hook, dark bassline melody to give this tune its identity I can see it working well.

So sum up - all the elements so far in my eyes have been done pretty well, just need some proper dark bassline action, and loads of FX on the intro. good work so far matey Wink

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05-05-2008 12:45 Homepage of Ketz
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