drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » djphrenzy - At the Lake djphrenzy - At the Lake Author Post djphrenzy Producer Registration Date: 10-09-2007 Posts: 96 Helpfulness rating:  Please check out my new track 'At the Lake' and post your comments here!!! Started on this today. Got some positive feedback from the folks I've sent it to. Haven't posted anything here in ages, so I figured I'd stop by and say hello with some new tuneage. Thoughts welcome, as always. __ -phrenzy- 1. Two Sawtooth Waves 2. Detune first wave +9% 3. Detune second wave -9% 4. ??? 5. Profit! 28-04-2008 06:49 BattleDrone 2161... the future. Registration Date: 30-12-2005 Posts: 6,413 Helpfulness rating:  Very American Beauty-style intro, sounds somewhat like intro music for a movie. Love the vibe! Kick is a bit too boomy for my taste. Very detailed composition, you took care of everything. The ghosthits sound a bit harsh/muffled to me. __ Check my soundcloud (exclusive tracks on there) 28-04-2008 14:04 Gregg Wicked Producer Registration Date: 16-05-2007 Posts: 417 Helpfulness rating:  Neat production, drums sound tight, though the whole tune is a bit too happy for my taste. LOL, the stuff at 1:06- 1:49 could be in a jungle jump and run adventure game. Fits 100% and sounds like pro game music. Although this is not really my coup of tea, I like it overall. Just the snare in the main parts of the tune could use some beefing up. Cheers! 28-04-2008 14:38 Krisch Wicked Producer Registration Date: 19-02-2008 Posts: 326 Helpfulness rating:  I like this sort of dnb and i like this one too.The intro and the drop are cool. I think the kick has too much low-end and the snare is could be louder but the track sound fine. 28-04-2008 16:27 Tomos Infidel Registration Date: 15-04-2007 Posts: 2,276 Helpfulness rating:  Excellent. I love that jazzy-electro-funky vibe you've gone for. The production is crisp and clear the whole way through. The levels are spot-on, the bass is there, the highs are there - it really sounds great. The only thing I wasn't wild about was the snare and the kick. I reckon the snare sounds overly-layered. Imo, it should be cleaner and harder. Same with the kick. But I'm nit picking. This is one super tune. __ MySpace | Soundcloud | Drumnbass.be | Facebook "It is far better to grasp the Universe as it really is than to persist in delusion, however satisfying and reassuring." Carl Sagan 28-04-2008 19:03 Ketz Thinking outside the box... Registration Date: 10-10-2007 Posts: 2,865 Helpfulness rating:  the vibe u created is definately fit for the title - i think i got a nokia ring tone that sounds pretty similar! (and thats not ment to be an insult, i really like the melody!) nice percussion around 1:20 synths / bass on the drop all fit well together good tune, refreshing ideas, nice work __ 28-04-2008 19:52 DRS Cool Producer Registration Date: 12-06-2007 Posts: 120 Helpfulness rating:  nice up beat vibes. i agree with tomos that the snare could be slightly crisper. tight production, good percussion. good melodies. well done my friend this is a decent track. 28-04-2008 20:07 technetiumzk Super-Duper Rad Funky Registration Date: 21-04-2008 Posts: 57 Helpfulness rating:  quote: Originally posted by BattleDrone Very American Beauty-style introhe vibe! Exactly what I was thinking. ( I love that song, this is not an insult.) Can you pm me a mp3? i really like this song! Everything is perfect in my opinion. __ LOL im 14, deal with it. 28-04-2008 23:31 walcor by walcor Registration Date: 14-02-2008 Posts: 140 Helpfulness rating:  Really diggin the melodies...nice! Everything is rolling nicely imo It kind a got going and ended...sad...hope you finish it and add sth interesting to the end Pro job __ walcor on last.fm walcor on SoundCloud 29-04-2008 08:46 Konnector Newbie Registration Date: 30-04-2008 Posts: 7 I like the percussion elements you added, it made the song stay interesting and productive. Awesome piece, I can't find anything wrong at all Cheers! 01-05-2008 01:34 djphrenzy Producer Registration Date: 10-09-2007 Posts: 96 Helpfulness rating:  Thanks for all the input fellas. Glad you are enjoying it. __ -phrenzy- 1. Two Sawtooth Waves 2. Detune first wave +9% 3. Detune second wave -9% 4. ??? 5. Profit! 01-05-2008 04:47 Sephiroth Master Producer Registration Date: 11-04-2006 Posts: 741 Helpfulness rating:  arrangement and structure are spot on, some good work gone into that. kick is nice and big, pumps out of mix well. nice sounds in build up, sounds like something from a film, gives the track identity, like it. reece and kick build up is nice to the drop. good drop, drums sound a little muffled behind the reece bass, could do with some boosting or maybe some parallel compression to excite them a bit. snare seems to get a little bit lost but its not a major issue, maybe jus tweaking levels. could jus be to do with the bass sound. production overall is clear and defined, bass is nice and warm and track has a defined vibe all the way through, nice work indeed!! __ Sephiroth Soundcloud: http://soundcloud.com/sephiroth_rees Sephiroth Myspace: http://www.myspace.com/sephirothdnb C-Sonix Soundcloud: http://soundcloud.com/c-sonix C-Sonix Myspace: http://www.myspace.com/csonix 01-05-2008 12:03 Seven Gun dotbee 4eva Registration Date: 16-01-2007 Posts: 2,232 Helpfulness rating:  like the beats. kick and snare could use a another layer each but they sound pretty good. not really my cuppa tea this style but its ok. needs a bit more to catch attention i think. big upz __ "When you lose, dont lose the lesson" 02-05-2008 17:50 djsimian Newbie Registration Date: 05-05-2008 Posts: 2 REALLY LIKE IT- KINDA OMNI TRIO- I FEEL THAT YOU SHOULD ADD MORE ATMOSPHERICS- THE ODD VOCAL OR SAMPLE- THEN WOULD BE COMPLETE PRODUCTION IS SOUND. 05-05-2008 01:50 twixda Producer Registration Date: 13-04-2008 Posts: 32 Jakata-style future-funk drum and bass with everything i like in a tune. Really interesting build-ups, loads of eastern ethnic type instruments make this one a bit different from your run of the mill DnB. Really liked the break down at 1.00,very quirky, very clever. As there is only half of the tune i can't give an accurate review, but what there is sounds like a great DnB roller and wouldn't be surprised if someone wanted to sign it up. I am looking forward to hearing this one finished as i reckon this will be a belter. Keep up the good work and a few more in this style would be nice. 05-05-2008 21:07 drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » djphrenzy - At the Lake