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walcor walcor is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Deep in Dance' and post your comments here!!!

if there is a hard ambient style this would be it !?....actually the melodies and bass are from a rock tune I made some time ago...the tempo there was 76 bpm ans getting it to sound right at 170bpm was a challenge....

Used two basses, rhodes piano, conqueror synth, conquest syndth, custom pad, echoes, and distant synth

And some vocals I had lying around FL...

Tell me what you think...did I screw up or made something worth while Big Grin


This track has been deleted on the producer's request

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26-04-2008 16:57 Homepage of walcor
DRS DRS is a male
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the break sounds thin and uninspired. you need to eq your drums better and process them. bost your kicks round 100 and your snares around 180. plugins like the oxford inflator and the sonic maximus are good for thickening up you beats. some more percussion on the break would be good to drive it more. layer it up with other breaksthat compliment it and eq. melodies arnt really my thing. nice vocals. synths sound a bit like presets, need a bit more depth. potentially a nice bass coming in around 140. needs more warmth, camelphat is a good plugin for this. elements of a good track floating around but a rework is needed fo it to come out.
27-04-2008 04:30 Homepage of DRS
Tomos Tomos is a male
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I really like the deep melodic vibes in this but, imo, those vocals just don't fit. They sound off-key. Of course, anyone with FL will recognise where they came from, which is not good. I'd agree with DRS that the 1.40 bass needs more warmth and some of the synths sound like presets. Without the vocals, this tune could be really, really good because it'd give you chance to concentrate more on the musical elements which are much stronger. Beats are pretty flat. They don't roll enough, but the snare is pretty good. Overall, a nice tune, enjoyed it.

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27-04-2008 13:02 Homepage of Tomos
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
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Bass is too silent. The ghost elements of the drums need some extra power too.
Sweet atmosphere.

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27-04-2008 15:46 Homepage of BattleDrone
walcor walcor is a male
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Thanks again for the feedback...i think ur right about the vocals...ill remove them...and war up the bass and drumz when i get my camelphat working

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27-04-2008 18:12 Homepage of walcor
walcor walcor is a male
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About the synts sounding like presets??? didn't use any...

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27-04-2008 20:36 Homepage of walcor
Ketz Ketz is a male
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hello mate how ya doin? mad fusion type feeling around the 1:00 mark. i like the synths and melodies - use them more not enough there! i think the beat could do with a bit more movement, more dancy.

nice ideas there man, i'm appreciating them, focus more on the synths and beats to get that finished product you're after Wink

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28-04-2008 19:33 Homepage of Ketz
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