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Paracyte Paracyte is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Broken Cloud (demo)' and post your comments here!!!

just a snippet ,early stage just started,any thoughts ? any suggestions ? appreciated like always.

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25-04-2008 01:21
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
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Don't like the wild/extreme panning on that synth in the intro.
The bass is cool once it has turned into a bass, but the pitch down thing to get there is not really my kinda thing.
Main part is nice, good vocals. Needs to re-use some melodic stuff from the intro.

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25-04-2008 01:25 Homepage of BattleDrone
DRS DRS is a male
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emotional start. like the bass build up to 130. listening oin headphones at the moment, so cant comment on mix down. seems pretty solid though. like the distorted sweeps. dont know if i would keep them running for that long though. possible take them out and replace them with somthng else so that the tune evolves slightly.
25-04-2008 01:34 Homepage of DRS
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Well the beginning is airy...like a trance tune imo...I used to make that stuff...once it turns to the real stuff at 1:30 sth...then its real nice...the beginning is too trance like, cant get over that...I know I'm no expert, but I would loose the bright synth and that bling blang tihng...just replace them with something more solid...then it would be great imo...

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25-04-2008 08:48 Homepage of walcor
Tomos Tomos is a male
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I'm really enjoying this one bro. Yeah, definite trancey vibes but that's not a problem to me, even tho I don't listen to that much trance (only the occasional psychedelic trance tune).

Very solid intro. Melodies and sounds fit well together.

Every time I listen to this (about 5 times now), that distorted bassline always comes in too rough and loud to fit in with the other sounds. If this was my tune I'd think about taking some of the distortion off until the drop at 1.33, and maybe putting some high-pass on it so that it doesn't seem so overpowering.

After the drop at 1.33, the bass sounds brilliant. So I wouldn't change it from that point onwards.

The beats roll well throughout. Really good tune, enjoyed it. Big Grin

(I already voted for this yesterday Wink ).

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25-04-2008 20:28 Homepage of Tomos
Paracyte Paracyte is a male
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Thanks guys ,so i get my hands on it and will finish.
cheers.

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25-04-2008 21:11
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hello..

nice atmos in intro, kinda hardcore i guess.... not sure sure if i like the drums but i guess they fit ok, good work in the sounds you use, better drums coming in at 1min 20ish... i dont like the vocal to be honest but the drop rolls ok... i havent read what others have said here about your tune but other than the lenth of the tune it does sound complete.

thanks.

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25-04-2008 21:14
Paracyte Paracyte is a male
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oh no ,this is an eaarly stage ,only bass line and beats are kinda done,i still work on it and there will be plenty to fit yet ,thanks.

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26-04-2008 02:10
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eazy mate. like the snare in the intro Smile ur usual synth madness coming in...always a joy to listen to.... bit of a mad distorted synth comin in now....not too sure about that one!

like the bass when it drops, need sum beat variations on the main part. Overall i'm likin the vibe you've created so far!

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28-04-2008 19:28 Homepage of Ketz
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ooo nice start...big thick trancy synths.

like the beat work. very nice.

that synth that comes in sounds outta time to my ears. my ears could just be fucked though Big Grin
its a nice sound just the timing is doing my head in

have to agree with Tomo about that bass in the breakdown. its too loud and proud in the mix. and like he said perhaps a bit tooo much distortion on it.

after the drop though the bass sounds cool.
if fact its all pretty cool. nice sounds coming in and owt

nice tune you got here. gett it done and it should be a good'un

looking forward to the finished tune Bigup

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02-05-2008 09:52 Homepage of D2o
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trancey vibe to this from the start, panning on synth in intro is a bit extreme, id suggest toning that down a bit.
when bass comes in its too much for me, too overpowering in mix, rein it back a bit.
vocal samples are used well, they fit nicely.
beats are pretty solid, kick is heavy, snare pumps through mix pretty well, maybe could with some eq'ing tho to make it a bit brighter and snappier.
nice track overall tho, when it does drop its really heavy, love that part of this tune,
nice work!!

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02-05-2008 14:52 Homepage of Sephiroth
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nice start....
is ruined by the arpy sample that is too panned.
i would just roll with the first bit longer.
the distorto reece sounds really nice. evolves nicely into the grimy reece bass.
i think the kick and snare could use one more layer each.

keep on this, has potential

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02-05-2008 17:40
Paracyte Paracyte is a male
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cheers peepz.

Yeah this arp must go Devil hehe i dont like it any more,i will come back to this one ,just got windows reinstal recently ,must put my staff together,
thanks for the reviews.

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04-05-2008 04:54
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