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lead:end lead:end is a male
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Please check out my new track 'the elektr-uniques' and post your comments here!!!

yeah, i used alot off u guys' advice and came up with this.. it's kinda different hence the name, i'm opting to make samples of some robotoid dude saying weird shit and all of that, but this is waht i've got so far.. everythings done on fruity
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24-04-2008 23:35
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
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I don't think it's a good idea to make your drums rather silent in the intro and much louder in the main part. The snare seems to have some reverb, don't do it, it sounds much tighter when it is dry.
Track seems to go nowhere, it lacks a groove. The drums and the drum variations sound like a rocksong rather than a breakbeat.
Some work to be done.

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25-04-2008 01:29 Homepage of BattleDrone
walcor walcor is a male
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Agree with BattleDrone...
As for the reverb on snares his right, I used to do the same thing, but you get a much more solid sound if they have no reverb...and the volume...was kind of surprising to go from really quiet to loud, either make a ghost drum or sth for the intro imo...needs some work...I know because some of my tunes do too...

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25-04-2008 09:01 Homepage of walcor
Tomos Tomos is a male
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Hmm, I'd have to disagree with some of the comments so far. Yeah, the beats deffo need some work to get them rolling more, the snare is flat, and maybe there's too many melodic elements all playing at once... but I love the basic melody behind this. There's a groovy, melodic vibe which is very cool. The guitar-sounding synth is great - best part of the tune, imo. Some more live-sounding instruments would definitely sound good in this I reckon - an electric bass for instance. Sound quality is fairly good throughout, although I'd totally agree that making the beat sound really quiet in the intro is a bad idea. It's confusing and doesn't improve the tune in any way, imo. But yeah, overall, I really like your tune bro. Big Grin

(I already voted for this yesterday Wink ).

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25-04-2008 20:43 Homepage of Tomos
freestyle
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hello...

the intro dont really hit me man, drums sound abit too computer ish, some mad sound you have here.... drums are much better at 1min 30 but still sound strange to me, tune is getting better as it goes on .... 2mins in and its getting groovy!... i dont think it needs a breakdown at 2;30, that kind of killed it for me...

decent track tho.

thanks.

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25-04-2008 21:18
Ketz Ketz is a male
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some cool ideas in the intro with the synth melodies.. somehow i dont the drop is big enough to get u goin, somethngs missing...maybe its the bass melody.

musically its a start but i think the ideas could be developed a bit further to make for a more interesting track.

but overall not bad at all Smile

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28-04-2008 19:23 Homepage of Ketz
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