The bass is too strong, it pushes the drums away. Use sidechaining or EQ your bass to leave room for the kick. Track doesn't roll. Basslines are a bit unpredictable. Tune needs work
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The bass is a bit haphazard. and the track doesnt really go anywhere.
The beats need filling out a bit. They sound week.
You have some good sounds, work on them a bit more and create a better structure. Maybe also find another sample. 'sound bwoy' other and other again gets a bit boring without another vocal answering back. Maybe add a pad in somwhere to help add a bit more dimension.
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hmm...I know I'm new to db but isn't it true that your tune has to evolve? this isn't going nowhere with the massive wobble imo...its like a continues intro...leave the beginning be and evolve to something with aggressive drums and some dirtier bass...thats my opinion
I'd have to agree with the other comments so far. It actually starts off being a pretty decent tune. The sound quality was crisp, the breaks built-up nicely... and then the drop at 0.44 sucked the life out of it, imo. After .40, the beats sound flat and quiet and the wobble bass is uninspiring. There's very little energy in the track cos the beats need to roll a lot harder and funkier. The basslines need to sound bigger and fuller too. Sorry man, don't wanna sound harsh, just trying to be honest with you.
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the kick drum seems to have a click at the beggining of it dude, the bass you use is very nice but a bit to overpowering compare to the rest of the tune, track is a good start but very basic i thing, there dont seem to be any stereo sounds in this?
thats the bad pionts .... the good points i would say is the tune sounds crisp, the sounds you have are clean,arrangement is ok, nice crisp hats and pattern.
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hi there, listening to the intro, a bit too choppy for me, could do with a bit more of a pattern - think the vocal is used a bit much and the bass could do with some work.
I haven't heard a proper drop, structure needs more attention - intro, build up, drop, main bit and outro!
Overal I'd say this seems like more of the "skeleton" of the tune, i say make it a bit more repetitive and then add meat - more layers on the beat especially!
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