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lokius
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Please check out my new track 'Nanocite (bounce)' and post your comments here!!!

Renamed & Updated,,,
Alot has changed, some has stayed the same
This is the best mastering i guess my skills are capable of.... might need some help with that.....
thx heads
19-04-2008 20:10 Homepage of lokius
brucifer brucifer is a male
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Drums a little quiet in intro. Nice samples though.

The bass in the drop sounds like it is clipping. It's knocking the rest of the sounds out... Make it hard to review the rest of the track.

There is some nice beats in the track, but its hard reviewing due to the bass.




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20-04-2008 02:17
Tomos Tomos is a male
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Yeah, I'm feelin this one once it gets going. The drop is very cool. Only problem with this now is the sound of beats because they sound quiet thin. I think that loud sub bass is drowning them. The kick needs to thump harder and so does the snare.

There's some excellent programming and edits with the bassline. Very pro sounding. The way you layer those different elements to make up the melodies sounds a bit like Calyx or Teebee. All the ingredients are there for a super. I just think you need to tweak those beats and reduce that sub a bit. Cool stuff. Cool

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20-04-2008 10:32 Homepage of Tomos
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Stereo phases everything (sounds like you listen to the track through a pipe). Don't do stereo shaping on your master. Shape the stereo of elements that need it (anything but drums and deep basses) on the FX channel of those instruments.
Track is a bit repetitive. Overall mixdown is a bit blurry. Nothing sticks out.
Keep trying, you are deffo improving.

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21-04-2008 14:58 Homepage of BattleDrone
Gregg Gregg is a male
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The intro is better than the one in your previous version but I'd still change things like having the drums kick in a bit later...

Main part is cool and kept me interested.

Cymbal at 1:30 reminds me a bit of Tee Bee.


21-04-2008 19:16 Homepage of Gregg
Ketz Ketz is a male
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hows it going man. i actually like ur bassline melodies, loads of chop ups / changes - proper bad-bouy feel you've created! the guys above a right - bass sound itself needs a bit of leveling out ot fit in the mix better but apart from that (and possibly the structure - a more conventional intro could work better in my opinion) i reckon this a really nice listen Smile

oh and just a suggestion - to possibly give tune a bit more of a ravey vibe why not stick a synth in there to fill out the high end (~like a few stabs here n there with delay - just a suggestion!)


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27-04-2008 16:48 Homepage of Ketz
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