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stickbubbly stickbubbly is a male
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Please check out my new track 'end of the affair' and post your comments here!!!

this tune is from a few months back.

i made it using logic, the virus c, trilogy, absynth, esx24, es1, and the es2

any comments are welcome.

cheers .be heads!



18-04-2008 06:35
walcor walcor is a male
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Cool tune ....really like the melodies...bass ain't bad either...tho the consistency got to me...gets a little tedious at the end imo...nonetheless great tune Smile

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18-04-2008 08:05 Homepage of walcor
Philthy McNasty Philthy McNasty is a male
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I kinda like what u were going for with this tunage. The wobble bass hits flow pretty good, but the reece u throw there in the 16th bar sounds so out of place, so does the apreggio. Not really sure what else to say. I enjoyed certain parts, and others not so much. You should try to focus on the wobble aspect of this tune, and rework the reece, and the apreggio and try something more wobblish, and then this tune will have a true feeling to it, and not seem like its a few ideas in one. If u know what I mean.

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18-04-2008 09:14 Homepage of Philthy McNasty
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
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Vocal in the beginning needs a longer reverb/delay, it sounds a bit unnatural for a vocal this way. The intro sounds damn pro.
The first bass sound is a bit thin. Love the way you build that vibe, overall feel is super! The drumline could roll a bit better though, it has too many holes in it to roll well. Maybe it's because your ghost hits are too silent. The rides in the drumline seem to dominate the tune pretty much, you might want to turn them down a tad.
Those sizzling FX in the background can be really dominating too, use then more sparse or turn down a bit.
Real strong track.
This is how DNB is at it's best imo, track entertained me 'till the end, melodies are great and the whole cocktail fits together very well.

The pitching synth (e.g. at 2:03) sounds off tone when introduced, the sound seems to be quite low-fi or distorted. If you shorten the sound and let it pitch from the start this will probably sound better.

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18-04-2008 13:04 Homepage of BattleDrone
Tomos Tomos is a male
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Apart from the long, drawn out vocal samples, I really like this. Imo, they get in the way of an otherwise super tune. Yep, very pro sounding, not just with the sound quality but also the way the tune is structured - the build-ups, drops, little fills, etc. It all fits together nicely and sounds natural. I agree with Philthy that the reese kinda sounds out of place in a tune like this. I'd go for some more funky and liquidish. Beats are cool, nice snare. Cool tune, enjoyed. Big Grin

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18-04-2008 18:47 Homepage of Tomos
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
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I think the reece adds just a tad of nastyness, the true spirit of DnB Love .
Fabio calls this style "Gully".

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18-04-2008 21:35 Homepage of BattleDrone
CULTURE BOY CULTURE BOY is a male
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nice track mate! synth work is very very nice! think the kick could be a little heavier..... not a biggie tho.

track has some propper party vibes!

big ups

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18-04-2008 23:53 Homepage of CULTURE BOY
Ketz Ketz is a male
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hello mate, yeah i like this one, musically melodies are very nice - all fit well together. i don't think the reece sounds THAT out of place but it is noticable. vocal may be over used a bit and the beat i think could flow a littel better.

but overall very nice track i like a lot Smile

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19-04-2008 13:47 Homepage of Ketz
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yeah wicked tune man , very nice , i think the beats need a bit of beef at the begining , but all the same , excellent work !!!!!!!
19-04-2008 14:32
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hello..

intro souding crisp, really like the funky feel to this, samples are brilliant, wasent expecting that drop but im in there man, happy tune, not being funny but this should get a release i think.

nice one.

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19-04-2008 17:56
brucifer brucifer is a male
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Nice funky intro!
Beats sounds a bit robotic, add a few ghosts

Bass ain't bad, nice and bouncy.

Like the sax solo Wink

Sound quality is good over all.


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20-04-2008 02:34
stickbubbly stickbubbly is a male
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thanks alot guys for your comments and reviews.


always helpfull

respekt!
22-04-2008 22:32
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