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TEST TEST is a male
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Please check out my new track 'clown style' and post your comments here!!!


probly still needs a lot of work but would love sum feedbk from da drumnbass.be heads..........holla ya views!

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16-04-2008 22:30 Homepage of TEST
junglist06 junglist06 is a male
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nice track generally, i like the intro, the intro beats cool and i like the build up, i think it leads to the drop well, one thing i dont know if its just my speakers but it sounds like something in the intro is getting louder then quieter. i think that the bass could do with a little variation towards the end, it kinda gets a little bit repetitive. i was expecting the drums to be a little harder when the tune dropped, i think you should deffinatly have a go at beefing up the break. cool track though, thumbs up

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16-04-2008 22:53
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
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Drums sound really cut up badly, they aren't really bad, but those loud hihats you sometimes use instead of snares are no good. With some work this could be an ok track.
Other elements are pretty much ok, the buildups could be more energetic and the use of different basses would fit the style better.

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16-04-2008 23:54 Homepage of BattleDrone
Tomos Tomos is a male
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Strange panning and volume control with the beats, very off-putting. I'd advise you to keep them centered with a more even volume level, maybe with a tiny bit of stereo panning. The basslines are ok but not my cup of tea I'm afraid. They are a bit drab for my liking, there doesn't appear to be enough energy in them. Beats are ok. They definitely need beefing up tho, especially the kick. It's almost inaudible and the snare is not punchy enough, imo.

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17-04-2008 23:26 Homepage of Tomos
TEST TEST is a male
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wkd,cheers for all ya feedbk guys,will try and work wit ya advise!big up
17-04-2008 23:30 Homepage of TEST
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drum sound nice

cool little conga breaks in there.

interesting drop. lead sounds a bit too heavy.

hmm songs stops at 1:20. not sure why. maybe its my connection.

sounded pretty kool from what i heard. i really like the drums man.

nice one.

cheers!
18-04-2008 05:34
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yeah not a good idea to pan the drums dude. i think you have some good ideas in the intro but some of those conga loops need to timed perfectly to acheive the desired effect (or maybe its just me)

not a big fan of the bass when it drops, melody is a bit too out of tune (i say that cuz i know tunes like this do that on puropse but dont think it works well on this one).

if i were you i'd rework the bass, keep the drums maybe a few more variations, maybe a few synth hits here and there to make it more musical

oh i like the laugh - who is that i forgot!?

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19-04-2008 13:39 Homepage of Ketz
TEST TEST is a male
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lol.sound!
krusty da clown
19-04-2008 22:55 Homepage of TEST
brucifer brucifer is a male
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Like the amen intro, but the snare is to loud, its dominating to much. Sounds like a Dillinja amen...

The intro of 2 mins is to long really.

That drop is just a headfuk really. The bass line is very clown like. It's hurting my brain. Its a bit loud aswell.

This track is for peeps on Ketamine really.

Not really my style, but big up. Smile

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20-04-2008 02:47
TEST TEST is a male
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@ brucifier.....reallly?lol
21-04-2008 01:07 Homepage of TEST
Tomos Tomos is a male
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Since you have a newer version of this tune, do you want me to delete this one?

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21-04-2008 08:31 Homepage of Tomos
freestyle
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intro beats are decent, i the levels of them jump around a little though dude. i do like this tho... nice rusty bleeps ..... original stuff going on here.... i think the bass overpowers the rest of the sounds to be honest. a few tweeks and you have a nice tune here.

thanks.

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21-04-2008 14:36
TEST TEST is a male
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cheers for da feedbk guys!

@ tomos. yh no worries...
21-04-2008 23:01 Homepage of TEST
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