hello mate
i think the initial idea is good, but for some reason on some of the parts (my opinion) the melodies may need a bit of work as Binary Havoc says needs to "gel" more.
still feeling the groove and i like some of the synths - sound a bit like some of high contras - style stuff.
i'd say theres a slight jazz vibe on this one - definately going in the right direction tho!
i see why you have trouble naming this. so many tracks that obviously sound like tihs have taken all the obvious names. i mean you could still call it Morning Sunrise. or something like that. average track with ABOVE AVERAGE NAME!
heck call it To Name It
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Not bad, but like you said, it still needs work. Deffo agree with Binary and Ketz. This is quite old skool sounding. It's got a nice vibe to it. But yeah, them jazzy rhodes are sounding off-key and spoiling the tune for me. It's hard to get into a tune when the elements aren't geling together properly. Breaks are ok but something more original would be nice.
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13-04-2008 11:24
CLARKFADER unregistered
hey , yeah nice elements to the track , likin the sound , i think the drop soundz like a second phase of a track , if know what i mean , i think that the rhodes and bass should be a little less high pitched 4 the first drop , maybe a different combo , but like the track , drums need some beefing up !!!!!!!!!
Thanks for the crit. and for the ideas, they helped, a bunch. I completely reworked the intro, the drums are a bit more beefy. I messed with the vocals, did a bit of chopping. The drums still need a lot of work on the patterns and change ups. The synth that follows the buildup is needing some major work as well.
When I get it worked out some more, I'll post the better version.
I fancy the jazzy vibe. Agree with the other’s that the rhodes needs some tweaking. You could try putting the whole melody an octave deeper and create a nice lead with the rhodes that includes some pitch bending and nice other shizzle. Would be hard to do but could work in parts…just a thought.
Not too unique as a tune but perfect stuff to chill to.
Like it so far, maybe think about a beat solo incorporating another break mixing in and out half way through( just an idea, could fill out a good minute,then try bringing some bass on top of that, then your melodies back again).P.S. sorry if that sounds patronizing.
i think the initial idea is good, but for some reason on some of the parts (my opinion) the melodies may need a bit of work as Binary Havoc says needs to "gel" more.
