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Greyone 
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Please check out my new track 'untitledunfinished8april2008' and post your comments here!!!
what the title says
i just want your opinions about the ravy stuff inside , i think i need to change it to something more analogue sounding (but while keeping the riddim)
whatchathink ?
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09-04-2008 12:10 |
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BattleDrone
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Like the structure and the melodies.
The vocals are a bit too helium.
The lead could do with some phattening.
Overall mixdown sounds ok to me.
Very entertaining shizzle.
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09-04-2008 13:24 |
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2clix
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I on the other hand love the vocals they stick with ya after the track is over
you use that lead with alot of your tracks sig. sound, could use a lil oomph
beats are tight, structures good
love the ravy sound,
finish it
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09-04-2008 17:36 |
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Greyone
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yeah i agree
vocals: are indeed a bit pitched up :p , i'll pitch em down a bit again.
rave sound : they do need some phatening , thanks for the advise , i'll try some vsts on it.
mixdown was done on bad audio gear , so this will be better when i finished on an other system.
thanks for listening and tips
greetz
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09-04-2008 19:02 |
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Sephiroth
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defo got a ravey techno feel to it, drums sound a little muddy i reckon, could do with brightning up a bit, maybe an exciter, gabba style kicks are quite nice.
arrangment is nice, well programmed and put together with some nice drops, fills etc,
lead seems a little lost in mix to my ears, could use some more beef to help it stand out,
sfx at 1:11, love that sound, sounds lush.
i reckon if the lead was beefed up a bit, maybe some distortion or some layering with chorus and drums made a little brighter and more defined this could be an ace tune, little hard for my taste but the structure and arrangment are top notch.
good work!
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09-04-2008 20:56 |
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junglist06
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loving this track, heavy, beats wicked, love the double techno sytle bass stabs near the begining
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10-04-2008 22:21 |
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cynik
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10-04-2008 23:18 |
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hardplnsdrftr
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Nice track.
I like it for the most part, but that synth is killing me. Totally ruins it IMO.
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11-04-2008 07:10 |
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Greyone
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thanks for the response fellow producers ,
any ideas for a replacement for the synths ? iv been tired of em too.
oi oi
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11-04-2008 07:26 |
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CLARKFADER
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too hardcore 4 my liking , sounds a bit rough , techy feel to it , headbashing stuff !!!!!!!!!
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11-04-2008 13:47 |
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Philthy McNasty
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Sick Nastiness from the Greyone! As I have told u long ago I am not one for this style but something about this tune got my head bobbing. Beat work is sick as usual. But gotta agree with Cynik&hard that hi synth is kinda blamph and annoying. Would like to hear what the tune sounds like without the synth. Just take it out completly and throw in some of ur sick ass beat edits and some drop offs, and other shiz and this thing would slam.
RespeKt!
Philthy
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11-04-2008 18:50 |
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Surya
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Signature Greyone sound 
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12-04-2008 09:57 |
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Halph-Price
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after that first sound clip "who am i" i thought this track was gunna blow, but the awsome kick with the drums and the rave sound is awsome. just the fucking WHO AM I is the only thing i really thing is a piece of shit, and really youd be better off farting into a mic and using that.
just so you know, let the noobs use the crappy samples. this track is better then that. there samples for a "regga" sound that most people start with, and yet this is a hard driving track, why not a nice robot sound? something that goes ith the darkr that goes with the mood.
yea all the sounds sound good except your choice of vocal samples. i'd want to listnet o it again if not for that. the worse part is you over use the samples. do you want to go all the way is the BEST sample i have heard that i want to use also, but you use it only fucking once, what the hell.
so ex-nay the "who am i" and the " i can't hear you" the dark monster sounda dn the "do you want to go all the way" use thoes twice each, and maybe find sometihng else that pimp to gow ith them.
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12-04-2008 16:41 |
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shahid-sa
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yeah like the track, nice n heavy. you can build it up more before it drops, the ravy stuff is alright though, and then not for everyone. you can maybe sequence the break a bit more, add variety to it, but on the whole, it's sounds nice.
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13-04-2008 01:53 |
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Greyone
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aight , thanks for comments , well yeah everybody wants to have exlucsive vocals , either you have to get them from good sources or do them yourself....
i just dont have time for that now :s (school)
but i understand your point halph price.
thanks again
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13-04-2008 08:23 |
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Halph-Price
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not using them is better then using them is what i was saying, more than anything. just thoes 2.
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13-04-2008 08:24 |
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Greyone
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so what u all try to say in one sentence is : less is more
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13-04-2008 08:32 |
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