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the moneyshot the moneyshot is a male
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Please check out my new track 'the silence' and post your comments here!!!

not finished needs more ummph!!!
any ideas?


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08-04-2008 02:27
brucifer brucifer is a male
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Yep, those beats need more ummph!!! Bit hollow at the moment. Saying that, it is a good beat, needs a few ghosts to get it rolling. I thought 'four days' by Bad Company was gonna kick in!

Not to sure about the synth sound, also a bit thin. The vocal is alright though. Like the feed back, maybe incorperate it a bit more.

THis tracks sounds like it should be a roller, but the beats are making it into a strange stepper.

Alright though Smile




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08-04-2008 08:57
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Yeah, those beats definitely needing boosting. I'm not sure you could do that by simply EQing them, so my advice would be to replace them with bigger, fatter sounds. The basslines are ok. However, I reckon you should layer a deep, subby bass on them to give them more depth. Vocal samples are pretty good, they fit the vibe well enough. The intro is well put together btw, I think it's good as it is. Keep working at it bro.

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09-04-2008 18:55 Homepage of Tomos
Sephiroth Sephiroth is a male
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drums sound a little thin, could do with layering or replacing with some fatter sounds, not enough 'ooomph' to em.
like the bass/ synth hook, pretty catchy, bass is nice and deep, could be a real good track, just let down by the drums i reckon, needs some ghost and rolls to give the tune more rhythm.
like the vocal sample, nice touch.
could be a decent tune if the drums were sorted out more, they're arranged well and fit nicely with the bass and synth, just need to sound a bit fatter and more rolling.

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09-04-2008 21:04 Homepage of Sephiroth
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EZ

Does that loop in the intro loop properly? sounds ever so slightly out to me?? May be is just me?

Drops quite nice, timings definately out on the synth line though which kinda spoils the nice dep groove. Check your quantise.
Fix that an I reckon this'd be pretty good




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12-04-2008 09:19 Homepage of Binary Havoc
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beat sounds a bit thin. like the synth bass but that needs more power - link it with a sub for a fuller sound. i reckon a u need a few more beat variations (maybe use an amen?) to keep it more interesting. otherwise not bad Wink

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12-04-2008 14:13 Homepage of Ketz
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