 walcor - Hell Fire |
walcor 
by walcor
Registration Date: 14-02-2008
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Please check out my new track 'Hell Fire' and post your comments here!!!
Well something I cooked up at work...thought this deserves to be heard...
Was going for a rave kind of sound hope it worked....
What concerns the structure well I tried to keep to some kind of buildup...
Hope you like it...
This track has been deleted on the producer's request
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07-04-2008 12:52 |
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CLARKFADER
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hey , the tracks been overpowered by the bass and synth at the begining , too much distortion on it !!! sounds very old skool , nice but messy at times , wierd but nice transition at 3:25 , needs some fx in places , like the second half better than the first !!!!!!!!!
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07-04-2008 13:14 |
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thechronic
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You should work on the mastering, the sound is ruined by overcompression, you lose a lot of punch and everything sounds very squashed.
The build up is very good imo. Use of effects (especially reverbs) is nice.
The mix is just a touch too bright and aggressive for my taste. Tone down the high eq on most sounds, and bring down the hihats and cymbals.
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07-04-2008 16:39 |
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brucifer
Making all the tunes your mum loves
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Sound a bit distorted. Shame cos it is really ruining an ok tune.
Hat is to loud.
Man!!! Sort that sound quality out!!!!!
THink the tune needs a few more aspects to it. Using the same chord progression over and over again gets a little boring.
Ah, it has changed 3.30 into the song.
I think you should take the elements from this track, some arn't bad, and re-write the tune. Create a better structure for it. Its a bit hap hazard at the moment. Some good idea though. Definately sort the sound out though. Its awful.
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08-04-2008 00:05 |
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walcor
by walcor
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08-04-2008 07:59 |
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Tomos
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Yes, everything sounds too loud and distorted. Too many elements fighting for attention. You deffo need to think about softening some of the sounds, especially the lead ravey synth. It drowns everything. Melodies are cool, I like them. The intro is excellent - It definitely has a rock vibe with those drums. I was kinda expecting and wanting some heavy, down-tuned guitars to drop like a big Linkin Park riff. 
For me, the tune starts to lose its focus towards the end a bit. But it's still a tune tho bro.
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09-04-2008 18:43 |
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Sephiroth
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build up is nice, some nice arrangment, pads are quite nice.
mix sounds a little muddy, everything seems to be fighting for space, get that eq out and start filtering off those unwanted frequencies.
pad at 1:25 is eating a lot of the frequency spectrum, makes the other parts nearly inaudible, bass seems a little overcompressed as well, its really squashed and doesn't grab your attention.
melody gets a little tiresome after a while.
could be a could track but its let down by poor mixing, everything seems to get lost in mix, really hard to do i know to get everything to find its place but you need to get that eq out.
the different drop at around 3:30 is nice, adds a different feel to the track.
concentrate on sorting out the mix and this could be a decent tune.
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09-04-2008 21:10 |
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walcor
by walcor
Registration Date: 14-02-2008
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10-04-2008 08:04 |
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