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2clix 
Doctor Obvious
Registration Date: 17-11-2007
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Please check out my new track 'Tuff luck' and post your comments here!!!
Something im working on, already have a better idea for it, just felt like throwing it out there
I used the make drum and bass button for this one in fl7
....didnt work
feedback...give it to me NOW
have a great weekend .be
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04-04-2008 18:20 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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Don't use (so much) panning on your drums. Especially on kicks and snares you shouldn't do it.
Good track tends to get repetitive around the 4 minute mark. The end is a bit "glued on". Should come more natural imo.
I seriously think that this is your best tune yet.
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04-04-2008 21:33 |
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Tomos
Infidel
Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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Very good indeed. Really good, solid sound quality. Yeah, I wasn't too keen on the panning idea either. It just sounds a bit weird and distracting on headphones.
I like the way you kept to one theme throughout the tune, that was kinda lacking in your previous effort. Imo, you've picked the right sounds and the granulized vocals sound perfect too. There's no doubt whatsoever that you're really improving bro.
Only thing I would say is, the kick sounds a tad too boomy. But maybe that's the sound you're after. Also, I would increase the volume of the main Predator synth a tad. It's just being a little drowned atm by all the other madness going on.
But I'm nit picking. Good tune!
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05-04-2008 11:39 |
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tryptech
Tryptech
Registration Date: 16-08-2006
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dont dig the intro that much, guess its oke, beats are oke, but could do with a nergy boost, build p is quite nice though. 1 min passing now
voice iss special, nice edits. Break sound fucking original, love it. great good edits on the beats, but gets quite repetitive in time passing. You ust need some werk on the master issue i think
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05-04-2008 18:56 |
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Sephiroth
Master Producer
Registration Date: 11-04-2006
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sound real nice from the start, drums in intro are nicely in arranged, got my head bopping straight away, nice and punchy.
atmos pads are nice, create a lush feel of tension, loving those drums!
glitchy grnaulised vocals are lush, loving them, reminds me.
drop is pretty hectic, panned snares are wierd, hurting my brain, not a good idea to pan snares on the drop, maybe do it on a glitchy-break section or something.
kick seems really deep aswell, doesn't fit in too well with the mix. not a fan of the metallic sounding snare but each to their own, bass sound at 3:10 is nice, decorence bass pack? or rhyhtm lab pack maybe? lush sound either way. shame its drowned out of the mix a little by the hectic drums. turn the snare down a bit i reckon, its a bit of an ear-ache after a while.
good tune overall, some adjustments needed but its sure got potential.
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