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lokius
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Please check out my new track 'Bounce *newer preview' and post your comments here!!!

thanks for comments on previous preview,,, hope dis betta
03-04-2008 05:55 Homepage of lokius
tryptech tryptech is a male
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Intro: Lovely swampy sounds, you snares sound better now, just a little less present and thats good. Beats are very ed rush style, though kick could do with some deeper layer. bass is nicee as helll. Muchos betteros



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03-04-2008 19:23 Homepage of tryptech
Gregg Gregg is a male
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Intro is not bad, just be careful not to overuse those sound effects. Place them more into the back round or add some cool filtering to them. Otherwise I would think it’s the intro of some IDM tune less then a dnb one.

Hmm….don’t like the snare too much. It’s kinda lazy. Layer another one underneath it.

I like the part at 3:20 where the bassline is changing a bit. The whole tune could use some more of those changings to keep the listeners attention. You could introduce some other elements that would add some more athmos or something.

Overall not bad, keep it up!

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03-04-2008 21:43 Homepage of Gregg
Tomos Tomos is a male
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Yeah, I wasn't too keen on the intro. Imo, there's too much going on, especially with those really noisy fx, and it's all too much to take in straight away. I'd try to be a bit more subtle, cleverer with them, like Gregg kinda said.

But once it gets going (from .44 onwards), it's excellent. I really do like those melodies. It sounds professional and it's deffo go me head going. Love it!

Beats are good enough, maybe a little quiet.

Niiiice tune bro. Big Grin (I already voted for this one the other day).

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05-04-2008 11:54 Homepage of Tomos
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it's a good track, but i demand a snappier snare.. sometimes it's suppressed a bit..
good stuff, rating much too low imo.
fx are cool.. vlobob-bass is cool too, effects same thing.. just a little more drive, to give the taktaktaktaktak..
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06-04-2008 03:18
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