Phalanx 
Chronologic
Registration Date: 13-09-2007
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Beats need to be much more up front, and need some ghost snare hits to give it some shuffle.
The basic melody and half step differences get a little annoying after awhile. You should experiment with a different rhythms or melodies every two or four repeats.
Finally, see if you can work in a sub bass- use a sine wave oscillator peaking at 60 Hz, with a good amount of compression applied.
Cheers and good luck.
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