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CLARKFADER
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Please check out my new track 'DEEP SPACE !!!!!!' and post your comments here!!!

this is my new track preview , needs some work , any sugestions welcome , it took me ages to get the beat right , still not sure thou , made on reason 4 , cheers !!!!!


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29-03-2008 21:48
LJ Fontain
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Nice track, not really my style but feeling it all the same, like the switch up at 1.40, nice atmospherics and the beats are nice and crisp. Defo liking the low end at the 1.40 mark, it just came around again while i'm listening and it gets the head nodding so thats a good sign. overall a good track, more inclined for the home/ipod than the dancefloor but a tasty number none the less. I'm still new to the producing side of things but have been raving for many years so know what I like and whats good and this defo has a nice vibe to it.
I will be posting a few of my tracks soon once allowed so a review would be good. keep up the good work and I will check some more tracks!!
30-03-2008 11:40
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EZ Clark

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Nice pads in the intro, like the bass melody, nice groove....
Not sure bout the hats? pitched a bit low imo

Not a huge fan of the snare, is the clap always layered with the snare? maybe sit the calp back a little or go for a more natural soundin snare?? who knows

Overall, nice vibe, enjoyed.

Peace

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30-03-2008 11:57 Homepage of Binary Havoc
CLARKFADER
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yeah , cheers mate , it took me ages to get the drums sounding the way they r , thats why i just left it , so i can get some feedback , as you can only do so much with a beat before u get bored with it !!!!!!
30-03-2008 12:26
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Hey man, I like the build up nice atmosphere, although at the moment its still sounding a bit on the minimalist side. I reckon the bass @ 1:40 could be more dominant maybe worth beefing that sound up.

So far so good - the skeleton is there, just need to add some meat! Wink

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30-03-2008 17:20 Homepage of Ketz
Tomos Tomos is a male
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I enjoyed the melodies during the intro, they are very cool indeed. I'd love the hear a whole tune based around that stuff. Not overly keen on the beats. The kick is a bit flat and the snare is sounding a bit weird. Sounds like you are trying to layer the wrong type of sounds. Good use of sub but it needs a volume boost. Enjoyed the bassline during the intro. Fits perfectly with the dreamy pads.

The tune tends to go pretty flat during the middle sections. I reckon you need to think about adding extra pads and sounds to fit out the tune. Also, I don't think the wobble bass is helping, I'd remove that if it was my tune. It sounds out of place and it's panned too wide.

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31-03-2008 19:25 Homepage of Tomos
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i won't be nit picky about the hats, they are actually perftct all to often new mixers will put them too loud, but really you don't need them you hear the 1k-3k of the snare more then anytihng and in this mix they stick out, the clap snare goes well with the mix and i wouldn't have mentioned it normally, but it fits. the cold sweat int he background is a nice subtle touch, very foten subtle isn't found in dnb. it's gotta be all Oy BOI in your face durms louder then the lead.


yea i like this track too, this is smooth. just to bad, with that sort of track, whne it ends you could just stop it all, and just build up with massive right ehre, or goto pads then do a drop, it's so open. in so many ways. a big reece could just crunch the trakc or a bunch of great chords, either way, it's a sizable attempt, finish it.

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31-03-2008 21:27 Homepage of Halph-Price
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nice intro, good work with the filter sweeps and pads throught out the track. bass could do with maybe a bit of variation and a bit more dirt imo (maybe sum distortion) kit could use some compression to

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31-03-2008 22:04 Homepage of SI-FI
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INtro synhts are nice, could do with some stereo panning. beat is a little hesitating in the beginning, i thing some snare is a little too late or early. bass is clean, but whole tune lacks of power.

keep producin

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01-04-2008 13:27 Homepage of tryptech
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nice atmos in intro, filtered drum build up is always nice, bass sounds in intro are nice too.
structure could do a bit more adventurous imo, gets a little monotnous after a while, wobble bass sounds panned towards the right too, sounds a little wierd, keep the bass in the centre, amen break in b.ground sounds out of place, rolled off to high, could do with more of its mid-range to help the drums gel together a bit better.
snare is nice and clear, kick is a little flabby with bass, maybe change the kick sample, not bad overall, could do with more variety, nice overall vibe tho.

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01-04-2008 20:22 Homepage of Sephiroth
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ez mate!

that snare dont fit imo and the kick is too weak.....

can see what ya aiming for with a more chilled track tho.

bass could do with more omph! but the riff and the ambience samples sound pretty cool

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01-04-2008 21:40 Homepage of CULTURE BOY
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I like it. It's got a really clean ethereal sound, the energy builds nicely, and it moves along well. Make 'er longer, bro!
02-04-2008 02:54
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