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OBLIVION12 
Producer
Registration Date: 16-11-2007
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Please check out my new track 'colours' and post your comments here!!!
hi, not really dnb as such nut i enjoyed making it
kind of oldskool flava
made on acid pro 6 albino massive waves plugins pluggo
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29-03-2008 00:54 |
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Phalanx
Chronologic
Registration Date: 13-09-2007
Posts: 333
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Hey,
I don't like the initial beat too much. I think the cymbals overwhelm the mix and everything sounds a bit too tinny. Also, the bass lead in the beginning is relatively weak.
I like the rave style synth backing at 3.00. The kick and snare could do with a bit of beefing up though.
Overall, I think you need a stronger melodic hook to progress the track, and you need to take down the high frequency shuffle in the beat.
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29-03-2008 01:31 |
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CLARKFADER
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this remindes me of like early 91` style track with a new flavor , nice i like , definatly needs more work , some beats need the high frequency turned down , its quite loud and tinny , but i have n-joyed listening to it , love old skool man , throu and throu , i think its your best 1 yet , but , its not drum and bass as a track , if u know what i mean !!!
please , vote and review my last track , pleace !!!!
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29-03-2008 13:21 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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Please limit your tracks to DnB only, after all it's called Drumnbass.be for a reason.
Track doesn't sound too bad. Sometimes the whole thing is drowning in reverb and delay though, it's a bit overdone.
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29-03-2008 16:22 |
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Ketz
Thinking outside the box...
Registration Date: 10-10-2007
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30-03-2008 18:10 |
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Halph-Price
Zombie Algorithm
Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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i quite enjoyed this song, just chillde to it, has a cool sound int eh start very open very expanded, then it's got a sound like in a tunnel with thoes massive echo samples going on. it would be a good dance track i guess. i liked it.
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30-03-2008 18:19 |
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Tomos
Infidel
Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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Pretty funky beat, but yeah, not dnb. It reminds me a little of the old Massive Attack stuff. Very old school sounding like most have said. The hi hats sound over-compressed and distorted to me. The mix as a whole is a bit messy too, especially in the second half. Maybe if those hit hats were turned down and cleaned-up it would should much better because they are dominantly the sound atm. You need to think about reducing some of the reverb too, especially on the vocals, and turning up the bass. This tune seems to be composed mostly from samples? I love the bassline, fits in nicely with the beat. It's almost got a dubstep vibe.
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31-03-2008 18:40 |
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haerie
Newbie
Registration Date: 02-04-2008
Posts: 6
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I like the intro VERY MUCH, very oldskool sweet, but I think that the body of the track is more like recent hard stuff than oldskool, not that that is bad either. Overall I like this track a lot.
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02-04-2008 03:21 |
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