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theaudiodemon
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Registration Date: 24-06-2007
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Please check out my new track 'Malfunction' and post your comments here!!!
Ok, where do I start lol ... Here we go with some Nightwalker style shizzle if your towards your robotic b-lines a bit more. Using reason 4 I added scream on my bass samples, and added a 2 defferent subs under. A bit of experimatation was used cos I kept my kick in under the snare fully , and added a higher end snare over the top.
check it out , and biggups to .be crew !
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28-03-2008 20:38 |
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Tomos 
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Didn't like the beat on this, unfortunately. It's very one dimensional. Needs to roll more with more groovyness to it. The wobble shizzle is ok but I'm not feelin it tbh, doesn't get me excited. But I can see what ya trying to do with it. I love those melodies from 2.53 to 3.14. The tension-building is excellent and I thought it was drop into a major banging tune. But it didn't, the wobbles kinda slowed everything down just when I was getting ready to give it the beans on the old headbangin. 
Again, the beat just doesn't do it for me. Too robotic, imo.
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28-03-2008 22:40 |
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BattleDrone
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I like the bass sounds, but not the way they wobble, it's too simple and not catchy enough. Drums are the same throughout the track and the ghost elements are not there. Check Taxman - Scan Darker for good drums for a track in this style.
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28-03-2008 22:44 |
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CLARKFADER
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i like it
, its not the best tune in the world , but deserves more stars , needs more variation , the beat works for the main part of the track , but dosent sound too great on its own , at the break and at the end , love the wobble , nice !!!!!!!!!!
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29-03-2008 13:28 |
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CLARKFADER
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please review my last track as , i have done 4 u`r last 2 !!!!!!!!!!
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29-03-2008 13:32 |
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Sephiroth
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not too keen on this drum pattern, doesn't really work imo, too repititive and doesn't have enough rhythm to it, not enough variations to em either.
mix is general is okay, everything is pretty clear, snare stands out pretty well. vocal loop gets a little annoying after a while.
sub bass is nice and low, gives some nice warmth to the track overall.
vocal sample is a little muddy and not very clear, could be a bad sample to start with or you could try using some restoration tools to clean it up a little, cant really make out wots being said.
arrangment is a little basic, doesn't seem to be much variation in the track, no breakdown section s or bassline variations.
nice mix overall but the tune could do with more varition and im not a fan of the drum beat either.
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29-03-2008 15:11 |
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Binary Havoc
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EZ
Quite repetitive in the intro, I'd ease off the malfunction sample a bit
Rolls along nicely enough but needs some variation generally as the whole thing is extremely repetitive.
Was very tired of the tune by 3:40
Peace
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30-03-2008 12:07 |
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brucifer
Making all the tunes your mum loves
Registration Date: 23-10-2007
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Don't like that intro vocal, to repetitive.
DRums are to robotic, needs some ghosts
Definately needs a change in break and bass....
Sound is alright though 
THose drums are doinf my head in now...
Needs a bit more dimension to the track, gets boring...
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07-04-2008 03:36 |
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