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jonah
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Registration Date: 09-06-2007
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Please check out my new track 'nudy' and post your comments here!!!
yeah so i cant remember exact what speedy v2 was like coz its been many many hours, but this ones called nudy. ive tried to take into account some advice and guess what......
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ive changed the melody.
three cheers yeah?
hip hip
hip hip
hip hip
i dont need any luck.
i could chat all day but then you wont be able to hear the track.
hugs and kisses,
jonah
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27-03-2008 04:14 |
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brucifer 
Making all the tunes your mum loves
Registration Date: 23-10-2007
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eh? bit better than that other one.
Certainly gets point for originality. Certainly arcade music for a game aimed at five year olds...
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27-03-2008 08:20 |
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Tomos
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Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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Definitely better than your last one but still needs a lot of work. At least you're getting some beats and bass in your tunes, and the melody holds together better. Really didn't like that trumpet sound tho, very out of place. There's something very child-like in your melodies. That's not being insulting, that's honestly how they sound.
Btw, be sure to follow the one track per week rule. 
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27-03-2008 08:33 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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That piano sounds off tone in the beginning. There's a nasty reverb going on which makes it all sound really bad. I could do a sick tune with just a snippet out of that melody.
Much better than your previous track though.
Stop using those very clean very traditional midi-wank sounding piano's, trumpets and stop making those complicated melodies (if you made them yourself). That's not what Drumnbass is all about. You could do complex melodies in DnB, but only if the rest of the track is rock solid. You are decorating the room but forgot to build the walls actually.
Focus on Drums and Bass at first, your drums sound clownish, thin and they do not roll, your bassline is just sub and it doesn't sound nasty for one bit. Needs work!
Now for you next track, take your time, listen more to DnB and see what makes the style to what it is and try to work more towards that. Lots of people who start composing feel the need to sound very original, which is merely an excuse for not being able to sound like anyone else mostly. Try harder to sound like mainstream DnB, when you are able to do that you'll know what it is all about and then you can decide where you want to go next, make your own style etc;...
There's hope, but you need to seriously work on your skills dude.
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27-03-2008 09:46 |
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D2o
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27-03-2008 12:40 |
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CLARKFADER
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yeah , your getting there , "with the beats" , but i think , in my quite long knowlage of drum and bass , is that u`ve got to , maybe get rid of the silly sounding piano's , it all soundz too kiddy fide , drum and bass needs to sound more serious and inteligent , "dark" , music that grabs you , start using nice pads and shit like that , by the way , what program r u using ?????????
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27-03-2008 13:14 |
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Krisch
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Registration Date: 19-02-2008
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Maybe a bit better then your previous tracks but still sounds like a polyphonic ringtone. You have to change your mind about sound selection.
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27-03-2008 13:30 |
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SI-FI
Producer DJ Obbsessed
Registration Date: 27-03-2008
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fairly week sounds. need alot of work on placement and sounds like youve used presets a bit to much
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27-03-2008 17:26 |
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Tomos
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Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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Btw, be sure to follow the one track per week rule.
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Look at you stamping your authority with your new mod powers 
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Sorry, I got a bit power hungry there. But we mods need to keep you common peasants in line.
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27-03-2008 17:52 |
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CULTURE BOY
v v v iv a record missing
Registration Date: 12-01-2007
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28-03-2008 01:23 |
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2clix
Doctor Obvious
Registration Date: 17-11-2007
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I think this track needs more cowbell 
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