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stiffer
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Registration Date: 06-10-2007
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Please check out my new track 'Malita' and post your comments here!!!
Easy
aint been about for a while. just got my computer back up and running and made a start. let me know what you think to this.
its only in its early stages so feedback would be sweet.
the vocal sample is from a live ray king soul band album thought it was pretty cool.
gonna go review some tracks peace
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26-03-2008 01:21 |
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reggez 
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Registration Date: 20-03-2007
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i have listen to this for about 5 times...
First of all, if i were you i would widen up main break. After the bass drops this break slightly gets disappear. You should also make more elements on drums. I think more hihats or percussion like congas (or second break) is a good idea.
This sound hitting in every bar in drop like T...T...T...T...T should be more distorted and enhanced in stereo. Atmos and vocal are good. More reverb or sth like that.
Huh... nice. i enjoyed and its keep rolling but i don't like jungle stuff so much 
This is clip so i won't write abuot arrangement. it's good but i think you should make more bulidups/tension and more melody variation in the end on every 4th bar.
keep producing
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26-03-2008 09:21 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
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The track is really cool, good build-up, well chosen elements... But the mixdown needs a lot of work.
It all sounds squashed muddy and distorted.
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26-03-2008 11:56 |
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jonah
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yeh yeh its really cool when it drops, i dunno about the intro thing as much, maybe just have a more chilled intro, and then a more sudden drop, say with like the pads/atmosphere, and then i dunno eq or filter the drums a bit, so they just in the background until the bass kicks in. but yeah the samples pretty cool. definately got a nice vibe. i rate.
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26-03-2008 17:05 |
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CLARKFADER
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yeah , whatz up !!!!!!! nice track , but not quite my thing , i dident really like the vocal , the beat soundz a bit muffled to me , needs to be a bit more crisp , and i think its all just a tad too bassy , but other than that , cant grumble !!!!!!!!!!
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27-03-2008 19:32 |
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InsidiousX
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its a gd track, but im more of a jump up fan
excelent track from a liquid point of view but i think the drums need some eq
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Forget liquid, jump up and darkside drum n bass is the way forward!
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27-03-2008 23:21 |
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dtconran
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Registration Date: 28-03-2008
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nice buti think this could be taken it both directions, i think you will be able to develop it therther and add and remove bits ,im am only a mild producer but im a listener to. listen to the critasisation from a listener as that is who its made for lol ;P. add more bass some harder hits but also keep it mello would be a good think to here just a suggestion keep it upp 
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28-03-2008 15:38 |
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Tomos
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Yeah, I like this, especially those cool atmospheric high pitched synth melodies. In fact, all the melodies are good. Lots of sub, maybe a tad too much. Beats are ok but a but messy. They sound over-layered to me, especially the snare. But I like what you've done so far.
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28-03-2008 22:18 |
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Sephiroth
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drums sound a little messy imo, too much layering with the mids or not enough eq work (or both), sound really squahsed and not very bright. maybe some variation too would make things more interesting.
sub bass is too much, turn it down a bit or compress it a little to stop the note changes causing the volume to jump about,
whale like sound fx are pretty cool, vocal sample works too.
not a bad tune overall, mixdown defo needs work tho, sounds all squashed, arrangment could do sorting out too, no breakdowns or builds up really to keep the listener interested.
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