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rockx
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Registration Date: 15-06-2007
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Please check out my new track 'Shredder - the horror' and post your comments here!!!
A song made of samples i am working on.
Please give your comment..
Cheers
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24-03-2008 18:54 |
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CLARKFADER
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good stuff , but tings r quite muffled , like the bass and beats , needs alot of work , i liks the samples at the beggining , the lfo on the bass needs to pitch up and down better "imo" !!!!!!!!
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24-03-2008 19:07 |
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Tomos 
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Hmm, this still needs a lot of work. That wobble bassline should be ditched I reckon, it's not doing anything for this tune. It goes on and on without changing. Plus, the wobble sounds like it's out of sync. The best bit of this tune is deffo the breakdwon bit at around 1.55. Sounds very metal. At 2.08 I thought it was gonna explode into a banging tune... but the wobble returned. Beats are very thin too. They are not punching through enough, the bass is dominating them.
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24-03-2008 19:50 |
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BattleDrone
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Bass sounds way to simple, needs some nasty FX put on it, after all your intro is pretty disgusting. The wobbly bass doesn't sync in any way with the drums. The drums are too much in the background and way too funcy for the effect you are trying to achieve. The soundFX are played on top of the track, they don't fit in really, you hear the tails of the FX when the the rest of the track has started again. When the lead is added the tune seems to go all over the place because the bass and lead patterns don't connect. Needs a lot of work.
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25-03-2008 10:32 |
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rockx
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thx for all replies, any tips how to sync a bass to drums? Is there a special tool for that, or is it just using your ears?
grtz
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25-03-2008 13:12 |
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InsidiousX
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needs a lot of work i like the vocals at the begging for a rave, but can u really imagine the rest of the track playing at one? work on the drums being more hard hittin, and get that bass in synchronisation with the beat
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Forget liquid, jump up and darkside drum n bass is the way forward!
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27-03-2008 23:29 |
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Halph-Price
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nice use of sample from house of a thousand corpses. it's odd i have sucha throw back to songs that i did exactly the same songs. so odd, the lead just sounds like it.
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28-03-2008 06:30 |
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