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theaudiodemon
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Please check out my new track 'Innocence' and post your comments here!!!

Easy guys, here something I've been workin on, beefed up the beats and got the b-line down.

...But feels like theres something missing in the equasion.

I've use Reason4 for those that dont know and made all my ambience with Thor.
24-03-2008 17:24
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
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Kick and snare are extremely loud, the other elements in the drumline are too silent. The drums need extra elements and the hihats aren't rolling very well now.
You'll need to add extra stabs, pads, fx, ... The bass is ok, but not special, sounds very dry.

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24-03-2008 17:33 Homepage of BattleDrone
theaudiodemon
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how do I stop it from sounding "dry" ?
24-03-2008 18:55
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nice , would like to hear a vocal or some thing to make it gel together more , i think the drops a bit long "imo" , but overall like it alot !!!!!!!! lovin the bass !!!
24-03-2008 19:15
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Good tune, liked it. Yeah, the kick and snare are a bit too loud compared to everyhing else. Bassline is really good and solid, with some other good melodic elements to back it up. Overall, this rolls very well, there's a good driving force behind it to keep it moving. That's what I like most about this. Beats are good too - but yeah, a little too loud maybe. Cool. Cool

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24-03-2008 19:41 Homepage of Tomos
stiffer
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Nice intro cool whirring pads with an undertone of melody.
loving the bass in the breakdown and then Boom
NIce drop!!!!
RUDEBWOY VIBEZ
yeak i like it mate
Maybe a bit more variation in the drums would be nice but overall a cool track.
peace
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27-03-2008 16:59
SI-FI SI-FI is a male
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kit sounds boxy but i like it, nice bass sound but could do with some work on it on the drop. needs tightend up. like hte sounds tho, nice track.

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27-03-2008 17:22 Homepage of SI-FI
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the intro goes on a bit too long for my liking but u may prefer it like that, i dunno. whats missing is a few different hats u could use to add energy, maybe up the tempo to 180 if it isnt already. also needs something more bassy. when u make a tune, play it and imagine ur at a rave and say to urself 'would i go nuts if this dropped?' and if the answer is no then do something to make it a yes.

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27-03-2008 23:34 Homepage of InsidiousX
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