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DRS 
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Registration Date: 12-06-2007
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Please check out my new track 'Grieves Bodily Harm' and post your comments here!!!
Another dance floor jump up track. Work needed to be done on break down, and fills. let me know what you think.
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19-03-2008 17:27 |
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Halph-Price
Zombie Algorithm
Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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nice track just eh lead sound in the track sounds muted. you might want to layer on another synth to make it stick out or distort that one, but its got a nice warm sound so that's why i suggest layer on anther synth, one that's just got 1k and up of high end. nicedrums.
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19-03-2008 18:34 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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This is way to nice to be jumpup imo, move away from presets! Your melodies sound like pop music.
Mix could do with some more definition of the high end, it sounds a bit muffled now.
The horn-stabs sound off tone.
Try to study some jump up tracks you really like and try to copy them so you can figure out how it works.
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19-03-2008 21:59 |
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DRS
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there isnt one preset in the track. i know this isnt your standared style jump up track, but it does retain many elements of one.
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19-03-2008 22:25 |
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Tomos
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Hmm, not my style I'm afraid. Sound quality is fairly good throughout, no major gripes there - although I'd agree with Halph that the lead stuff sounds muted and would probably benefit for an extra layer that is a little distorted. Also, the beats could do with some extra beef. A little thin at the mo.
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20-03-2008 00:23 |
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CULTURE BOY
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Registration Date: 12-01-2007
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