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Uberchile Uberchile is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Temperance' and post your comments here!!!

my last two weeks.... in music

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19-03-2008 00:38 Homepage of Uberchile
d1sjoint
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I really like this track. Nice and ambient throughout, with that piano (where i find the echo really effective) giving a really eerie feel to it... also a real kind of euphoric feel which is refreshing somehow.

I dunno though, i feel it would be so sick with more of a dancey liquid d&b feel to it, although it's a different style. This is great to chill out to, but i'd love this to be made into something to dance to!

Maybe have some drums come in with the piano playing on the offbeat i don't know...

It's still good though for what it is, it's consistant with subtle changes keeping it interesting, nice one!

Second time was a lot nicer after i was ready for it (after listening to limewax all evening - took some adjusting haha)

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19-03-2008 00:50
brucifer brucifer is a male
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Wow!!! That is one nice intro. Not to sure about the sound of the echo synth, bit scratchy for my liking.

The drop is nice and smooth mate, A little bit trancy for my liking, but this is a fantastic tune.

The drums are a little bit quiet, but the piano does the talking to be honest. This sounds like something from a film, at least it should be.

Music for an Autumn evening Smile

Very impressed. Going to listen again. A pleasure listening to Smile Smile Smile

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19-03-2008 00:58
Tomos Tomos is a male
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Very sweet indeed. I love the combination of strings and piano. Almost gothic sounding. The piano melody definitely sounds like something from a Coldplay album. Nice!

Only thing that really lets this down are the beats. In comparison to the thick, sweet melodies they sound thin and weak. There's no oomph in them, they definitely need to sound bigger, fuller, fatter. Also, I think the use of amen-like beats are out of place. This tune calls for something more unique and tailor-made, I reckon.

Also, towards the end I was thinking that you could made the melodies sound a bit more dramatic by layering the strings a bit more, making it sound like a small orchestra.

But another very nice tune. Keep progessing. Big Grin

(I've already voted for this).

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19-03-2008 10:40 Homepage of Tomos
Uberchile Uberchile is a male
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cheers guys, i might make a 2nd version with more powerful drums and a fuller sound then

UC

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19-03-2008 16:48 Homepage of Uberchile
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
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Nice track, high end could be mixed a bit more vivid. You kick drum needs to be louder. Needs some proper bass badness to have some contrast with those sweet piano lines. The sounds you use sound pretty "preset" (the piano doesn't count for that of course).

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19-03-2008 21:51 Homepage of BattleDrone
CULTURE BOY CULTURE BOY is a male
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intro is too long with too little going on.

track seems to get boring before its even kicked in

soz mate

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21-03-2008 19:15 Homepage of CULTURE BOY
dtconran
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very mello ,prehaps a tiny bit repeating but extreamly listanable could listen to this track for hours good job,
28-03-2008 15:24
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