 Nosrac - Canadian Tank |
Nosrac 
Bag of Hammers
Registration Date: 15-12-2004
Posts: 599
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Please check out my new track 'Canadian Tank' and post your comments here!!!
No samples, loops or presets. Any comments on structure, intro, mixing etc. before I finish this one up? Cheers.
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Tunes pictures and info: Myspace Page
MP3's: Acid Planet Page
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13-03-2008 17:42 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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Would have liked it if the Baseline and the drums would have rolled more. EQing and mastering is near perfect. Track gets a bit repetitive after a while.
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13-03-2008 21:10 |
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Tomos
Infidel
Registration Date: 15-04-2007
Posts: 2,276
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This starts off really promisingly. Ultra fat, clean, techy basslines. Can't fault them. However, I think the beats are poor. They sound so distorted, muddy and quiet. Dunno what's happen there? 
Your beats are usually spot-on but the kick is very thin and the snare is mushy. Also, the basses seem unusually loud. They dominate the sound too.
In terms of structure, it's lacking punch and drive, imo. There's no real oophm and meat in the tune. I think that's mostly caused by the beats. If they were rollin and bangin, this tune could be super.
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13-03-2008 23:38 |
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mayhem
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Registration Date: 13-03-2008
Posts: 12
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to be honest it sounds like the tracks i used to make on fruity loops.love the idea but it needs to be more full..the drums could use some serious layers and the bass more crisp...but i like the flow of it it works very well...u have the right idea thats for sure. the intro is kinda "oh where did u come from", would add more sounds to it , some FX more of a build up something to get ya ready to move your body...but i like what your doing and keep up the good work , cause giving up dosnt get u any farther .
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14-03-2008 05:25 |
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Sephiroth
Master Producer
Registration Date: 11-04-2006
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some nice mixing work, sounds nice and clean in the intro, drum maybe a little muddy on the drop. some nice deep 'wub' bass. good arrangment throughout, kick seems to get a little lost in the mix, bass could maybe do with some eq'ing to let the kick pump through a bit more, like the sweepy synth sound at around 4:00 mins, would prob play with that some more, bass is nice + deep but not too clear.
tracks has some good points but seems like the drums should 'roll' a little more, would drive the track along imo.
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14-03-2008 22:47 |
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ChemicalBass
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Registration Date: 14-03-2008
Posts: 12
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I like the dirty bass line that brings the tune in but it seams to be a bit over powering for the rest of the tune and not a lot else seams to come into it. The tribal drums towards the end are a good brake from the rest of the rythmn but there is a lot of room for other effects or mellodies to come in. The tune goes on for a bit too long doing the same thing. The build ups are there but more could be added to keep the listener on their toes and interested in what's comming next.
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15-03-2008 02:48 |
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Ictus
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Registration Date: 14-03-2008
Posts: 8
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Takes a very long time to build up to any form of track, has some interesting effects and sounds that make your ears prick up to listen to it, but no perticular melody line or tune, it's an interesting track but doesn't really make you get up and dance. The track is also a bit monotonous as well, it could do with being quicker and the music changing. What is there is good, the bass kick I personnaly think is a bit to loud, but it just needs to get a good melody line and some chance for a dance to start, it is sort of background music at a party than a get up and dance tune.
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15-03-2008 15:32 |
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TANK~
Tourist
Registration Date: 18-03-2007
Posts: 17
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The overloaded compressor, shock too silent, themes poidiotski zvuchatb it is necessary to develop an idea. Idea primitive
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AIM = tankdnb
ICQ = 151733424
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15-03-2008 18:51 |
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