 Parasyte - Darkness |
Parasyte 
aka Sickboy
Registration Date: 04-03-2008
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Please check out my new track 'Darkness' and post your comments here!!!
I will show you Darkness...
First bit of decent work,
Comments/Feedback/Flaming appreciated 
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10-03-2008 23:33 |
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its dark alright...
i will give the best comments i can i was listen to this at work and trying to be quiet... i need headphones.
nice drum work for me i didnt find it repetitive it was chopped up nicely..
nice dark track
nice work
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11-03-2008 00:24 |
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2clix
Doctor Obvious
Registration Date: 17-11-2007
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It def sounds dark, but I cant hear your kicks at all, pretty much drums need beefing as well as the bass, I fall victim to this to, its a learning process
I really cant give that detailed of a review like the other guys here, but it sounds like you have good ideas, now the hard part is figuring out how to bring those ideas/sounds out...crisp and clear
you can only get better, little by little it'll start to come together... years from now we might actually be happy with something you know
peace
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11-03-2008 01:42 |
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wrm
orchestral/idm/deep/liquid/experi/mental
Registration Date: 13-09-2006
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Yeah, sounds very muddy at this time. The bass needs more clearnes imo. The intro is sick man, those people screamin got me some goose skin. The break you got there way too in the background. Could use some layering.
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11-03-2008 10:00 |
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Tomos
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Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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Yeah, not bad, lots of pretty good ideas there but still a lot of work needed on the sound quality side of things. In particular, the mix is quiet, muddy and lacking clarity - especially the beats. To bring this tune up to standard would probably require you to listen to each individual sound and clean/modify accordingly and then think about where it fits into the frequency range of the tune as a whole. It's actually not that difficult to do. A bit of patience and knowledge.
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11-03-2008 19:12 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
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Good combination of hardstep, jump up and darkstep elements. The structure of the drums reminds me a bit of "Piper" fro Jonny L. The mixdown seems very muddy untill 2:33 where suddenly the high end gets lifted. Track needs a main hook and some variation. Could be realy big shizzle!
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12-03-2008 13:18 |
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ChemicalBass
Producer
Registration Date: 14-03-2008
Posts: 12
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As fare as tunes go this is on to a winner. The levels are a bit off though. The snare drum sounds muffled and the bass kick is a bit too quiet. Nice change of beat effects to keep it active and interesting, but the mellody could do with changing to keep the tune interesting as well. I'd try something different every eith bare just to brake it up a bit. The vocal effects are a bit too loud as well. Nice dark feel to the tune though, and the off beat rythmn to the beggining really sets it off.
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15-03-2008 02:55 |
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