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philbee
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Registration Date: 18-10-2006
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Please check out my new track 'bleeperz(preview)' and post your comments here!!!
easy peeps
something ive been workin on for around 4 hours or so
in between workin,dark/techy/neuro funker kinda rollin style..quite different soundin so any feedback is appreciated good or bad as usual,
big up all the .be massive
peace
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10-03-2008 00:09 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
   

Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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It takes a while before the train starts to roll, but when it's rolling it's going just fine. Not much of a song structure there, could use some extra element(s) after a while because it tends to get repetitive.
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10-03-2008 00:42 |
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goonybag
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Registration Date: 12-11-2006
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nice crisp sounds, well eq'd, or well sourced for sure, with some texture layering this will be a bad arsed intro for sure. production sounds spot on in this part, atm needs a little layer adding imho. nice stabs aroung 50 seconds, easy drop, but the production on the drums is sweet, something i wish i could achieve. yeh, fuckin sweet production as usual, drop at 2:14 is sweeeeeet! just layering required, but i think you know that allready. a great backbone for a balltearer. nice work, look forward to the finished version. a bit of a twist at the end with a surprise would be cool.
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10-03-2008 11:10 |
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Tomos
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Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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Philbee style all over this. Really solid shit. Agree with Battle that it tends to get repetitive and it's lacking some dynamics in terms of drops, breakdowns and stuff. Also, it'd be real nice to hear a more dominant evil bassline with a sick melody. The intro has some pretty original and good ideas. Beats sound crisp and heavy, although they are distorting very slightly when the track really gets going. You can hear it on the snare more than anything. Btw, did you layer a kick on that snare (or a kick-sounding snare) cos it's got a low-ish thud to it, if you know what I mean. Good work with the shuffly hi hats.
Very good start, especially for 4 hours work. Looking forward to the final cut.
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10-03-2008 20:25 |
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TANK
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Registration Date: 13-03-2008
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hello, i from RUSSIA, and bad speack english.
track like me but strukture is small
need more ideas in tune.
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13-03-2008 20:44 |
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ChemicalBass
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Registration Date: 14-03-2008
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Nice long intro of sound building the tension of the tune. Hard bass effect bringing in the build up is really effective, but build up before the main drum riff could have been a bit more intence. The progression of the beat once started is quite up lifting, and the main beat makes me wanna dance. I think, unfortunatly, there is a lack of mellody in this tune. It could mybe benefit from a hard middle mellody pulling the base line through the tune, changing on the odd bar. However the pace of the tune is nice and fast and all other aspects seem spot on.
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15-03-2008 00:35 |
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