 dip_registered - Gunmat |
dip_registered 
Benx
Registration Date: 19-04-2007
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Please check out my new track 'Gunmat' and post your comments here!!!
Preview of my latest track, would love some feedback. I haven't done any tracks for a while so it'd be interesting to hear some criticism again. A big thanks to everyone for listening!
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I'll edit ya face to sit tight there in the mix
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08-03-2008 08:09 |
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Tomos
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Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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Yeah, pretty good. Decent work on the beats, good sound. The gritty bassline is ok but gets a little tiresome towards the end. You deffo need more edits and bass sounds in there cos I don't that bassline alone won't hold a tune. Good start.
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08-03-2008 11:45 |
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wTrouble
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Registration Date: 01-06-2005
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Not bad.
Defo needs some variation to the b'line as it's good but gets a bit same same - get some switch ups happening. Snare could maybe be a bit more prominent. Aware its a preview but you will need some structure and buidup.
Do some more work on this, be good to hear it with some of the above.
wT
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09-03-2008 06:08 |
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CLARKFADER
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hi , would put more too this track , needs more fx`s and the beat lacks a bit of style , did u make this on reason , sounds like it ???????? like the wow bass at 1.00 , made me smile !!!!!!!!!
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09-03-2008 13:16 |
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ChemicalBass
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Registration Date: 14-03-2008
Posts: 12
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Not a bad intro. Melody line could do with changing a bit more. Nice beat change at 1:39 though. Nice drums over all. Needs more work on the melody.
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17-03-2008 17:32 |
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