 walcor - Exhibition of Life |
walcor 
by walcor
Registration Date: 14-02-2008
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Please check out my new track 'Exhibition of Life' and post your comments here!!!
One of my late night projects....came home after work and got some inspiration...and started composing...You might recognize some samples...I used ones I got from this site...This is the closest to mainstream DnB I have done for now...My friend didn't believe that I made it at first...he thought some kick ass pro made it...well a second opinion is always good...so tell me what you think...Tough the sound quality you hear may not be the same as what I hear from my original.
This track has been deleted on the producer's request
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06-03-2008 10:24 |
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walcor
by walcor
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06-03-2008 13:12 |
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Seven Gun
dotbee 4eva
Registration Date: 16-01-2007
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i noticed you uploaded FOUR tunes in one day....
the rough rule is, one track per week. therefore i felt the need to delete
a couple of them.
i still left you the two that had been reviewed and deleted the ones without.
please dont try to re-upload them, at least not for a good few days anyway.
thank you 
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06-03-2008 16:28 |
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Parasyte
aka Sickboy
Registration Date: 04-03-2008
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Wow, love the intro, really gets you gripped, nice use of breaks and bass here..
this track really flows, love the build up!
Love the bassline, really smooth bro, what I like to hear. 
I love that screaming synth fx you got in there!!
Cons? drum programming could be a tad better, some parts it's like a breakdowm constantly, but maybe that's just your style and me being a bit picky =P
Apart from that, nice work! 
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07-03-2008 01:10 |
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Tomos
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Yeah, totally agree with Ghosty. Definitely some good sections there - the jazzy rhode melodies, the bass stabs, the snare sound - but the mix has too much reverb. Too many things have reverb on them. A tune like this needs a balance between reverb and drier sounds, I reckon. The rhodes are especially guilty of having too much reverb. Also, I think that harsh high pitched synth doesn't really fit.
Decent tune tho - enjoyed.
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08-03-2008 11:14 |
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brucifer
Making all the tunes your mum loves
Registration Date: 23-10-2007
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Ha ha, know what you mean about the sample! 
It's not a bad tune, but it seems a bit all over the place to me. The structure is a bit messy, actually, it doesn't seem to flow really.
A few interesting idea though...
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09-03-2008 02:06 |
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wTrouble
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Not bad, like a lot of the elements in this tune, remind me of lots of things, old metalheadz. Agree with and don't have much to add to the other reviews above, especially on the tune structure.
Enjoyable tune tho...
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09-03-2008 05:58 |
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walcor
by walcor
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Since everybody is complaining about the structure I'm going to re do it...and upload that...but you got to know that this is my first ever DnB track...I started making DnB tracks since February this year...
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09-03-2008 09:58 |
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walcor
by walcor
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So after a lot of criticizing about the mix buildup and flow I remade it and will post the remix on Monday so have a go at it and tell me is it better now... 
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09-03-2008 16:27 |
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haerie
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Registration Date: 02-04-2008
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WOW. I am totally digging the goodness of this track. Where can I score it for my iPod? Very full, carries you along with it, sweet sounds and surprises throughout, you did it right.
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02-04-2008 03:40 |
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