 Dj Casket - Yours Truly |
Dj Casket 
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Registration Date: 26-02-2008
Posts: 18
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Please check out my new track 'Yours Truly' and post your comments here!!!
fl 6 again. just thought i'd upload this tune to show off some different style. its a pretty simple tune.
This track has been deleted on the producer's request
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04-03-2008 19:54 |
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boomhauer
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Registration Date: 03-03-2008
Posts: 12
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Very nice - if Oribital made liquid dnb id hope it sounded like this.
I like the fusion between trance/euphoria samples and drum and bass here.
Certainly would go down well at a sunrise set somewhere - I cant help but picture tracks in certain scenarios when I hear them!
Improvements? the breakdown at the end dissapointed me - felt a bit empty, not the strongest end to a great track. Snare is also just a bit too soft and dancey (pitch too high I think) - you want to be careful you dont get considered a trance producer!
Not sure quite what else could help here. I'd like to hear more from the clunky sounding organ sample at the beginning too, kinda gets lost half way through, bring it back at the end perhaps I dont know. Bass works well too.
Enjoyed this one
bH
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04-03-2008 20:37 |
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Dj Casket
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Registration Date: 26-02-2008
Posts: 18
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thanx a lot , the end will be fixed. to be honest this is the 1st version and the track was very rushed through (4 good reason). im going back to throw alot more in it.
this track was originally meant to be sung over. thanks 4 your time and feedback it helped a lot.
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04-03-2008 22:06 |
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theaudiodemon
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Registration Date: 24-06-2007
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[quote]Originally posted by boomhauer
dancey (pitch too high I think) - you want to be careful you dont get considered a trance producer![quote]
I dont know how he can be seen as a trance producer, check out supression, I thinik that'll clear it up... But this has a nice trancey vibe to it.
you need to turn your beats up, make the kick and snare bit more dominant.
Besides that excellent track, maybe a chorus to break it down in the middle?
Im gonna rate this high for the fact that it all blends well together and if this was mixed down properly would be a very uplifting track 
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05-03-2008 18:14 |
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Tomos
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Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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Watch ya post loads bro - 1 per week is the limit. 
Fuck, those melodies during the first half of the tune are sweet. Wow. Deffo up my street. I could imagine myself doing something like. 
The guitar and string work is excellent! Really, really good. Dreamy and cool as hell. 
Yer bastard, I was gonna write that!
The tune starts going a little downhill from 1.56 onwards for me. Personally, I would much prefer it if you continued with the guitar-stringy-rockish vibe. Instead, it kinda drifts off into a trancey tune, which, imo, never really works in dnb tune.
Beats need a bit of work, imo. They sound pretty quiet and thin. Deffo need to roll more and sound more... well... dnb. The kick deffo sounds like something from a trance tune, rather than a dnb tune. Same with the snare.
But yeah, super, super first half mate. Enjoyed!
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05-03-2008 19:28 |
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Tomos
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Check your PMs bro.
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05-03-2008 19:40 |
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Ictus
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Registration Date: 14-03-2008
Posts: 8
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I like the use of quitar in this track, very nice effect and really stands out and grabs your eay, the build up to the tune is brilliant and interesting, grabs your ear instantly, nice chilled grooving tune, deffinately one of the best I've heard so far, least at the moment, only one minute into the track, I'm writing as I'm listening and I like what I'm listening too. The drums and snare are good. I like violince as well and the synth used, this track has a lot of depth and interest to it, even though it's a chilled track it still makes you wann dance and groove along with it. The changes are so veried and diverce and happen so fequently that it really makes you pay attention to the track. Great track to be played in a club or just chillin at home with your mates or by yourself, very well done indeed-e-do. very abrupt ending though.
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15-03-2008 16:25 |
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muphasta
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Registration Date: 29-06-2004
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with all respect I dont dig this. If there was just a steady houce/trance beat This could be Regi's/Milkinc....
Sorry bro. IMHO synths are cheap sounding as so is the melody. wont rate it!!!
sorry for being honnest!
cheers
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