 OBLIVION12 - Sawtooth |
OBLIVION12 
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Registration Date: 16-11-2007
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Please check out my new track 'Sawtooth' and post your comments here!!!
made the bass on massive! fucking love that vst now! automated it throughout, needs more work in all areas but i will put it on here now
also come across this little vst that emulates commodore 64 sounds loving that too
i'll go back to this and try to deal with the frequencies
peace
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04-03-2008 19:37 |
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wTrouble
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Registration Date: 01-06-2005
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It's quite hard to know what to say before a track is finished...
The intro feels a bit long/empty, would be good if things got going a bit sooner...
The drums are doing my head in a bit. Quite a bit actually. Its a real relief when the new element comes in at 3:30.
I like the bass - SICK! (yes, massive rocks!)
but there really isn't a whole lot going on and I'm a bit over it.
Defo got potential though. Loud and clear. I'd be throwing a few extra elements in.
I'll be interested to see progress on this one.
ez....
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05-03-2008 05:06 |
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Parasyte
aka Sickboy
Registration Date: 04-03-2008
Posts: 35
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Good tune, the intro is way too long..
The bass is quality, definitely needs some beefing up though.
Try using a different break, it gets too repetetive for my taste 
I do like that intro break though
Good tune, work on it matey 
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05-03-2008 11:00 |
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CLARKFADER
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yeah , i can see how this would get a low rating , i think the drum beat at the begining is of pitch , doesent sound right , and the drums at the drop dont have any ompth !!!!!!! like the bass at the drop , but lacks any sort of flavor , this would not sound right out and about , nice begining , and atmos , needs alot of work !!!!!!! nice in parts !!!
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05-03-2008 13:33 |
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shadraq
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Registration Date: 01-02-2008
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Nyc intro yeah deal with the Fq's layer the bass
could do with bit more sounds, Dirty B.line like
flavor...
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05-03-2008 14:23 |
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theaudiodemon
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Registration Date: 24-06-2007
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I think this tune needs quite a bit doing...
the snare sounds like im listening outside a club, needs sharper beats, bass is crisp, add some atmosphere to it and mix it all down, defo got a lot of potential here so keep at it !!
P.S ... Maybe add a couple more breaks it there, sounds a bit empty.
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05-03-2008 17:54 |
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Tomos
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Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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Very psychedelic in parts, which I like. Some good atmospheric sounds in the intro. Intro is a tad too long tho. The bassline is definitely on the right lines but it's too mashed up in places, the melody is almost inaudable in parts. Love the psychedelic vibes in the outro. Beat pattern is ok but I agree with the others that the snare needs changing. As a whole, this tune lacks a bit of direction and structure, imo. The middle section doesn't seem to be going anywhere. There are no build ups or drop downs, etc. Also, the beat is too rigid and repetitive. But yeah, some good ideas there.
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05-03-2008 19:12 |
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Ictus
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Registration Date: 14-03-2008
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the effects used on the instruments keep the song interesting, but I personnaly think that it takes a bit to long to get going, the build up is nice though. This track could do with alot of work, as I don't personnaly think there's enough depth to the track, and there isn't enough bass to it either. Some more bass a quicker pace and a faster build ups and the track will be good, I personnaly think anyway. After 3 minutes of listening to the track it doesn't really appear to have gotten anywhere, and the drums a repetative, they need to be changed alot more. I like the underlaying effect used 3 minutes thirty into the track, the effect could come in ealier to keep the track interesting. Not really a dance track, more of a chilled in your bedroom track after you've just been clubbing.
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15-03-2008 16:30 |
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Binary Havoc
Binary Havoc
Registration Date: 25-07-2007
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EZ
Nice chilled vibe through the first minute or so, not sure about the flange / bit crush effect that comes onto the beats at around 1:05
Bass is pretty good, big massive fan here too. lots of variation in the automation works well
There's a ghost hit just before the 2nd kick in the pattern that Im not sure about, gives the whole beat a knd of swing feel??
Could do with more of a hook musically imo. because the massive synth changes so much, it dont really play a melody as such. Maybe layer it up with some more less complex synth parts?
Peace
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16-03-2008 10:04 |
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