 OBLIVION12 - Sunday |
OBLIVION12 
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Registration Date: 16-11-2007
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Please check out my new track 'Sunday' and post your comments here!!!
Easy! got a new laptop150 quid on ebay lol, asus dual core and im loving it, made on acid pro 6, finally i can play back what i make all the way until its finished. my last machine was lacking in every way, n e way! this is my new one and i hope for a better score than my last uploaded! jesus! it werent that bad! lol
Peace :-) OBLIVION12
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28-02-2008 15:26 |
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CLARKFADER
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hi mate , this has promise , nice bits in it , and i see u r putting more oompth in u`r tracks , i think the drop was just a tad long , and u`ve got a bit too much distortion and delay on the beats , little bit less yeah , but u`r getting better aswell !!!!!
by the way , watch those samples man , im a big house fan as well !!!!
needs a bit better arangement , but good , peace !!!!!!
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28-02-2008 15:43 |
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shadraq
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Nyc1 try layering the bass with some lo-fq good rollin drums arrangement could do with a tickle
overall dark good roller L8r Mate.
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28-02-2008 17:08 |
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Tomos
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I looove the melodies in the intro. Sweet use of vocals. I wish you kept that vibe running longer. The dark part of this tune, I'm not so keen on. Just doesn't do it for me. It lacks focus.
The mix is quiet and muddy. Needs more clarity and boosting. The hi hats and crashes are pretty bad because they are all mushy and distorted.
Some good stuff from you there tho.
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28-02-2008 20:22 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
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Intro is really nice, mix sounds a bit flat... try and search for better mastering techniques. Tune rolls really well, some of those long pitching basses ruin it a bit. Overall mix is extremely muddy. You should try and find some stronger bass patterns for your main part and repeat good stuff rather than inventing stuff that doesn't seem to go anywhere.
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28-02-2008 21:38 |
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Sephiroth
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Registration Date: 11-04-2006
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intro melodies are nice, set up the whole track well, some good arrangment up to the build up,
drop is a bit dissapointing imo, everything sounds a little clustered, lacks clarity, rides + hi-hats on the drop are too much, try bringing down the top end a little, sounds like ur boosting them, the bass has some nice arrangment and filter automation but doesn't seem to cut through the mix enough + stand out.
not a bad effort overall, jus the mixdown isn't very clear, sounds like u need some decent monitors or a good pair of headphones to spot the errors in the frequency spectrum, try getting the voxengo span analyser, will give ya a better idea of how the frequencies are spread throughout the mix.
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03-03-2008 21:10 |
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demolitionkid
where's demo?
Registration Date: 08-11-2006
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yeah welcome to the .be we pride our selves on giving helpful advice yet ripping you apart with the score ratio 
its not that your tracks may not be good,its more of you have to really earn it.things that you may think sound good may not sound so great to other people.i learned that a lot of dnb; when you write it ;is left up to the way a person interprets what your really making happen.youve got some good grooves.the track has a good over all feel to it.i dont know what i just heard ,but it sounded like a 20k squeal. like something may have been sampled that was compressed.find out what sample that is and put a low pass over it.keep working this its headed in a great direction.just make sure you tidy up your lose ends with the mixdown end of the deal.the squeal is at exactly
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04-03-2008 02:32 |
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demolitionkid
where's demo?
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135 and 201 are the offending times
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04-03-2008 02:32 |
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OBLIVION12
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Registration Date: 16-11-2007
Posts: 80
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allright cheers for the reviews guys
i must look into frequency analysis, i havent even thought about that up to know
im still struggling with EQ
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04-03-2008 16:23 |
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