 ico26 - trun around |
ico26 
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Registration Date: 05-01-2006
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Please check out my new track 'trun around' and post your comments here!!!
this an old tune which i have just found
in the days when i fl to write tunes the vocal on the track where done by x
c what you think ?
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Let the music do the talking
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26-02-2008 12:12 |
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wrm
orchestral/idm/deep/liquid/experi/mental
Registration Date: 13-09-2006
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FL samples in the whole choon...its hearable and it makes you choon sound, how to say it...to be honest...crap. Dont take it wrong. You should definitely get some samples and not use fl samples cos everyone who uses FL will recongnise that in first few seconds of the choon. The string is a little bit off in some part. Try to rework that pattern with some more precise notes. Dont pan the bass man...put it in the centre. It sounds weird. Even the break sounds weird when its panning. The overal sound is very amateurish (which you obviously are...I am not saying I am a pro, but u know what I mean). I would recomend to use different samples. Work on the levels, some sounds fight for space (the break for example). I like the pad in the background though
take care
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26-02-2008 15:36 |
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Tomos
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Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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Yeah man, this sounds like an advert for FLStudio cos it's immediately obvious where those sounds come from. The main melody is actually good, I like it. But because I can tell the beat and vocal were lifted straight from FL, it leaves me with a bad feel about the track. Also, the panning of the beat is a very, very bad idea. You kinda broke "Dnb Rule #1" by doing that. Good melodies tho.
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26-02-2008 19:39 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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Not really feeling this one... choice of instruments could be much better. Drums are just playing their own song, they don't glue to the rest. Panning on drums is nono. Track has no clear concept.
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26-02-2008 23:04 |
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walcor
by walcor
Registration Date: 14-02-2008
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Amm where to start...improve your track sound quality, do a better mastering. Don't leave it like this...I know because my stuff used to sound that way too...the general idea is good and fresh, but it need some heavy tweekin...
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28-02-2008 19:27 |
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the moneyshot
str8 outa nocash
Registration Date: 31-12-2007
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every one says tweak and master please explain then us NOVICES will no how to handle the comments. not to sound rude but i thought this site was about helping peeps, all ive done here is help my self to info. it seems a few producers are not very helpful just critical.
we all have to start somewhere!!!!
thanx 4 ur attention 
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29-02-2008 01:59 |
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boomhauer
Producer
Registration Date: 03-03-2008
Posts: 12
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Cant say anything more than the other posts,
FL Studio demo!
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04-03-2008 21:00 |
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